This... This is just incredible! I love it! Holy shit, you're so talented! I can't stop reading this over and over again

Absolutely wonderful! I love the character development throughout this story. Alice and Jefferson's relationship was beautiful and complex. I do however wish the story had been broken down into chapters. Reading one incredibly long story was a bit tiring on the eyes and mind.

This is literally the best Jefferson story I've ever read. The fact that it only has one review is such a crime that I had to leave one to tell you how beautifully written and well thought out this was. It's so hard to find good OC's but I adored Alice and my love for her only grew the more I read. I'm sure this story would have had more readers/reviewers if you had split it up into a few chapters and made them have to wait and beg to read more. If you ever write a sequel or another Jefferson/OC story, I guarantee you I will absolutely read it.

This was so beautiful.