I am addicted to them too. I’ve never been able to reread books but I did immediately and reread MAF after FAS. I love the different points of view too! I wanted a scene like this so badly in the books! Also a playful wingspan measuring

EEEH! re-reading it I love it as much, if not more, than the first time I read it!

I absolutely loved this story! They are so freaking cute and hot all at the same time! I loved that you had the idea to write this story and even though English isn't your first language, this was beautifully written! And the idea of putting both pov in the same chapter is brilliant!

awwww! also,i loved the wings! been looking for s story like this for a while! thanks.

Amazing

I absolutely loved the way you wrote this. It was sensual and romantic at the same time. It wasn't just about the act of intimacy but the value of trusting your lover because truly that is a moment when all of yourself is exposed and vulnerable to the other person. Not only the physical but the emotional and mental side of oneself.
I thought it was beautiful.

Personally, I loved Rhysand's POV much better than Feyre's. I think you connected on a much deeper level with Rhys and it could be because he was the subject of the seduction. But I loved how you took us into his feelings and the connection he experiences with Feyre. There was just a higher level of sensuality from his perspective. Loved it.

I also want to say that your story was very tasteful. I didn't see anything wrong with the use of body parts you incorprated. Really, these same expressions and words were used by SJM in the book and it is rated as YA not Adult fiction. I have read much more graphic and outrageous stuff on this site so don't sweat it. I wouldn't change one word! You did a fantastic job and I hope you continue to write!

~Sweetwaterspice

Ooooh, so steamy and so well written.
You've done a wonderful job with this fic: it's not tacky, it's not over the top and the characters are so true to the books that I have no problem imagining this as cannon.
More than that, as an ESL teacher, I'm so very impressed by how well written this is. Writing in another language is a mammoth task but you've done it with style and aplomb, not to mention skill!
Thank you for sharing this with us!

I LOVE IT

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"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

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Thank you so much! I love this!

I love how well this is written. You made several nods to the style SJM uses in her writing which made it feel like it was an extension of the original books. So in love with this whole scene, I always wanted Feyre to take control and go to town with his sensitive Illyrian wings and you delivered! Amazing job..I'll need to reread this again!