After reading the sample chapters, I'm willing to give this one a shot, despite knowing SFA about "Sekirei".

Nice! For his other Sekirei, I suggest: Haihane, Yahan, Akitsu, and Kocho. This gives him two close-range specialists, a teleporter, an elemental, and a brain.

Huh, I wasn't sure you would be posting that. The idea is nice but you didn't seems all enthralled by it. :) Good job though. :)

As usual, a DAMNED GOOD start!

Glad you also updated "Memories of Nobody" too. My all time favs by you are that one, "Raptor", "Wizard's Law", and finally "Reaping the Cards".

Also waiting for an Update to "Pagans and Gods" and "Dusk and Dawn", too. They're just lower on the Totem Pole, so to speak. Same with the others by you that are on my friends list.

"Chaos Incarnate" is also a good one I wish you would update.

In the case of "Raptor", though, I have had a single thought which I actually wanted to see: What would happen if Dumbledore and Voldemort were dueling and an Indominus Rex showed up in the middle of the fight, Harry riding on her neck?

Oh this is finally becoming a full story on it's own rather than remaining a drabble! Thank you so much! No matter how many times I reread it it always makes me laugh D

this is hilarious and very well written
i hope more chapters come to you soon and that you get no writers block

Epic! More please!

PLEAEE FOR THE LOVE OF THE HOLY PANTYS PLEASE MAKE MORE

I'm sure I've stated to you in the past but I will reiterate, You always have the most interesting ideas and can write them very well, to boot.

Yatta, arigato for this fanfiction that I hoped you would continue