Reviews for Heart Palpitations
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 1/23
So, I'll start off by saying I love the fact the characters are in character. Even Keith's in character, and he's not appeared yet, simply had actions he would take described. I also love the fact Lance is presented as bi-sexual, and while he's already with Keith, it didn't feel like it was dumped on the reader. The prose is also very nice.

If one thing were to bother me, it's the fact that Keith's a nurse. It feels a bit off, so when you continue could you possibly put in some context as to how that happened? It feels mellow for Keith's personality, so I'm really curious as to how he came to have such a position, particularly since everything else went so smoothly.
Rokushimo chapter 1 . 8/29/2016
It was really cool. Can'y wait for the next chapter !
butterdoveluv chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
Very promising start! I do hope you plan to continue this !
Guest chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
I need more stuff like this in my life
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Good start! Keep it up! :)
Erzatscarlett chapter 1 . 7/28/2016
There's only been a few AU stories I've enjoyed and they were Fairy Tail NaLu or for the whole Guild written by Snogfairy, Nicole4211, and a couple others. But I think I'll like this