Woof! Woof! Woof!

I think the scene with centaurs was great!

I feel sorry for Fudge.

Great fight scene! Well done!

Luna is one scary witch!

Love this story so far. Obvious error in this chapter though. It's King's Cross, not King's Crossing.

Probably a year or more late to the party on this chapter, but I'm assuming you decided cocaine would affect a dragon differently than a human? Because that stuff speeds up the heart rate, makes a body more alert, tends to make the user somewhat jittery and/or hyper, and it kills the appetite. Your dragon acted more like someone tripping on LSD with a side of the marijuana munchies plus opioid sleepiness.

Point of order: the officer commanding a unit in the British Army is identified in radio comms as SUNRAY, not ACTUAL.

Looking forward to more.

This is one of the newer stories that I have read. I started a little over two years ago reading HP fan fiction and have even re-read a number of fics. I have thoroughly enjoyed this tale to this point. It always amazes me how an author can keep all these diffferent side stories going and in an order that causes them to congeal properly. I must admit that I enjoyed the JKR books very much, but always seemed left with something that did not quite make sense.
Your take on the happenings has been mostly unique to what I have read in other stories, given a few likenesses, and I have enjoyed the reading very much. I look forward to finishing this story and seeing what else you have in store. Thank you very much for your efforts.
One point of curiosity, in a recent chapter, I believe you mentioned that the Majors were not used to talking portraits, but doesn't the PM's office have one that announces that the Minister FOR Magic needs an audience with the PM? I do realize it only comes "alive" when a meeting is being requested. Did I mis-read something?

Why do I get the feeling I've just read a line form Make A Wish or Terminal Justice? In those stories, if something happens, everybody assumes Harry pulled it off. If you haven't read them yet, do so! Anytime someone in authority asks him something, he says " I'm just a guy on vacation. " But nobody believes him. Read Make A Wish first as it's the first story of three. Terminal Justice is the third and set in the DC comics universe. But that request from the lady elves reads so like it came from either of those! I'm a big fan of H/Hr/L. Though, usually, Kuna stays her usual wacky, yet lovable self. It allows people to ignore whatever she says normally with the exception of Harry.

continue its good inner magic slowly transform ron into centaur he be afrain on beginig(like must be barefoot when his feet turning into hoowes)in time he accept its gain lesons in centaur history traditions and his mind slowly turn from envy lazy human boy to inteligent sillent young centaur they give him freedom he gain new name (he become love be centaur live and be part of centaur clan he burn alll his human stuff to other centaurs see he turn into full member of clan )save astoria. use magic to repair non magican societly (rid of disctimination coruption greed and other bad thinks)create CCM its mean commision of controll magic or commision counter magic as preparation of remove state of one fanfiction stories for avatar is navis is created from humans when aliens brigh many of them on pandora and use forced evolution on them to adapt on pandora i magine humans iin this story combine magic and technology with they evolve into navi only diferense from state before transform is they found footwear uncorfortable and binding(is builded footwear museums where they go look on footwear and talk how binding and dangerous for health simple humans stop use footwear (move that into museums)and unite by always barefoot.

And this is where I step away. The suspension of disbelief with 'Null' was too much to handle. And that's coming from someone old enough to have been goth when goth was actually a thing. No self respecting goth would run a moniker like Null. Leave that attention grabbing nonsense to the emos.

I do believe the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder has spent so long playing with words he's miss something here. Harry never said Snape was welcome back in the school. He only said Snape had till the end of the year to cry mercy to Lady Longbottom. That is not the same thing as saying he was welcome back in the school. So I hope the wards burn that Death to ash! Or as in another story throw him out into the far north Atlantic Ocean. Either way works for me. And if Fumblemort were to follow very soon after, no great loss! Just the Primary Dark Lord taken out early. I have absolutely no use for that meddling old goat rapist!

complete my ass i feel gyeped i was end and bumblegalores comupence