Reviews for Smartarse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Im so confused reading this, there was no pacing, quite literally harry and Hermione are talking on the phone than on the night bus cracking a bert and ernie joke(nice btw how did I never see that) followed by luna being more Luna than usual, it felt like one big paragraph that wouldn't end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who died in place of Sirius? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good for the Alliance. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like what is happening to Percy. It is cruel and not funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent fun! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work ladies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent! Wow! Travers is a DE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done! Beggar them. However with the potion how much of their conduct and attitude are they responsible for? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I enjoyed reading it, thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aloah, just finished the read through of your tale and I enjoyed it very much. I liked what you did with Ronald, I absolutely disliked how you handled Percy and I also think that a sequel is absolutely necessary. Personally I love the 2 triad's you build the story around and am looking forward to what you have in mind for them in the future. I think, you've let a few good arcs go to waste (i.e. Draco and Pansy) but maybe in the sequel we will see more of them. Over all a very enjoyable read. I hope that you will be be spared any more illness in the future. Br Shadow |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh snap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really wish you had not kept it up. The segments pertaining to Prissy and Ron add nothing to this story and I could have very well done without them. They are two of the four characters that I tend to avoid when reading HP fanfiction. The other two being Molly and, to a lesser degree, Ginny. Oh well, it is your story and I truly have no say about whom you write or what your preferences are. All-in-all this is a wonderful story and I am enjoying it tremendously. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy's wedding was cruel. Not the wedding but dressing him up like the bride. Younger sons marrying heiress and taking their family name did indeed happen in Medieval Europe and elsewhere. They did not give up their manhood. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Percy just doesn't get it at all. Although Penny should not have embarrassed him either. That wasn't cool. |