Reviews for Smartarse
thedarkwolf95 chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
Im so confused reading this, there was no pacing, quite literally harry and Hermione are talking on the phone than on the night bus cracking a bert and ernie joke(nice btw how did I never see that) followed by luna being more Luna than usual, it felt like one big paragraph that wouldn't end
Cassandra30 chapter 26 . 10/31/2018
Who died in place of Sirius?
Cassandra30 chapter 24 . 10/31/2018
Good for the Alliance.
Cassandra30 chapter 23 . 10/31/2018
I don't like what is happening to Percy. It is cruel and not funny.
Cassandra30 chapter 22 . 10/31/2018
Excellent fun!
Cassandra30 chapter 21 . 10/31/2018
Awesome work ladies!
Cassandra30 chapter 20 . 10/31/2018
Excellent! Wow! Travers is a DE.
Cassandra30 chapter 19 . 10/31/2018
Well done! Beggar them. However with the potion how much of their conduct and attitude are they responsible for?
Cassandra30 chapter 18 . 10/31/2018
Ouch!
Talonwalker chapter 32 . 10/28/2018
Great story, I enjoyed reading it, thanks
AustrianShadow chapter 32 . 10/27/2018
Aloah,
just finished the read through of your tale and I enjoyed it very much.
I liked what you did with Ronald, I absolutely disliked how you handled Percy and I also think that a sequel is absolutely necessary.
Personally I love the 2 triad's you build the story around and am looking forward to what you have in mind for them in the future.
I think, you've let a few good arcs go to waste (i.e. Draco and Pansy) but maybe in the sequel we will see more of them.
Over all a very enjoyable read.
I hope that you will be be spared any more illness in the future.
Br
Shadow
BeautifulBanian chapter 19 . 10/26/2018
Oh snap!
morcheller chapter 23 . 10/24/2018
I really wish you had not kept it up. The segments pertaining to Prissy and Ron add nothing to this story and I could have very well done without them. They are two of the four characters that I tend to avoid when reading HP fanfiction. The other two being Molly and, to a lesser degree, Ginny.
Oh well, it is your story and I truly have no say about whom you write or what your preferences are. All-in-all this is a wonderful story and I am enjoying it tremendously.
Thanks
Cassandra30 chapter 17 . 10/19/2018
Percy's wedding was cruel. Not the wedding but dressing him up like the bride. Younger sons marrying heiress and taking their family name did indeed happen in Medieval Europe and elsewhere. They did not give up their manhood.
Cassandra30 chapter 16 . 10/18/2018
Percy just doesn't get it at all. Although Penny should not have embarrassed him either. That wasn't cool.
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