| Reviews for Smartarse |
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   retired10 chapter 26 . 9/23/2017 I just love your story! Wonderful job again. Thank you for all the work and creativity you put in. Very well done! I love it but love you much more. Love Chris |
| katmom chapter 26 . 9/21/2017 Another fun-filled chapter. Thanks for sharing. |
| dennisud chapter 26 . 9/21/2017 I love the way the trios and allies are slowly pulling the noose tighter over all the Bad guys and gals here. You can see they are working on a long-term plan not just to Stop Tommy munchkin but Bumbles and the Ministry corrupters. Should be a fun finish to this ride. |
| god of all chapter 26 . 9/21/2017 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| jwright42572 chapter 25 . 9/4/2017 Love this story. Always have a stomach ache when I'm done reading this from laughing so much. Watching for your next update |
| Calebros chapter 1 . 8/27/2017 "Harry whistled and surprised himself." - He suprised himself with what? That he can whistle? When you make a change in the scene, like after Harry and Hermione talk on the phone it would be better to make a note that it is not the same scene any longer (even a line would be good). "Are you three through?" - don't you mean finished? So Hogwarts starts at the age of 12/13 and not 11/12? "She quickly covered his hand with hers and kissed him only to be replaced a moment later by Luna." - Since the last female to talk or do anything was Luna do you mean that Luna kissed him twice? If not, then you should change then name at the end to Hermione. Was the choice to deny Harry his heritage as the Potter of Potters unanimous from the Wizengamot or were there some or a lot who were against it? Also at several times you forgot the " when you started or continued a dialoge. Still, nice story so far. |
| retired10 chapter 25 . 8/25/2017 I love this chapter and the last one - actually I love them all but these were very, very good. That Omake was awesomely funny! Ireally, really, really look dorward to each and every installment! Thank you for making your many, many fans so very happy! Love you bunches! |
| kelwin chapter 25 . 8/23/2017 waw good chapter. I want another one up in less than 2 days lol. loved the chapter I liked the bit with harry and the bow. thanks |
| kelwin chapter 24 . 8/19/2017 good fic. thanks can't wait for more. |
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/24/2017 Harry should have been harder are the betrayers. Those girls are not sorry for what they said; they're sorry they got caught, which means they aren't sorry at all, |
| jbfritz chapter 24 . 7/26/2017 Great story! Please post more soon! |
| retired10 chapter 24 . 7/25/2017 Love it! You are such a talented writer and I am so glad and proud that you are shaing your talent with us. Thank you! Love you lots! |
| jwright42572 chapter 24 . 7/20/2017 Good chapter getting quite exciting now. Good job on saving house Bones |
| god of all chapter 24 . 7/20/2017 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Paddybee chapter 21 . 7/17/2017 KID gloves, not KID'S gloves. ie made of leather from young goat (kid) for maximum sensitivity, implying delicate work. KID's gloves are merely for children. |