Reviews for Smartarse |
---|
![]() ![]() Wait, did Mr. Bole end up liking what he was compelled to do under specific circumstances, without being in those circumstances? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() As usual, awesome. I love the whole story. You are so talented. Your "mature" scene was very well done and I agree with you. Less is more - leave it to the readers imagination. I will reread it in a day or so and comment again. Love you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I've never dueled anyone near as powerful as those two. It would be quite the . . . battle." No, professor. It would have been a culling. And Potter and Longbottom would have come out winning. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol I thought maybe I was wrong or the centaurs had something interesting wording. I don't think the boys have to worry too much about Ron for a bit lol. I don't see him being able to walk for a while lol. So none of the staff think twice about the Headmaster getting everyone drunk just a couple of hours before the students show up? Hope they enjoy their kite flying! |
![]() ![]() ![]() One way I judge a good story, is whether the stiry makes me feel the emotions. This one fits the bill and more. Wonderfuljob! I wait with with excitement for eachadditional chapter. Thank you for sharing your gift with us all. Thank you also for your ser ice. You are truly one of my heroes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was scary brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! I always read each new chapter, and the one before it so I know whats going on, 2 or 3 times. True genius brother mine! Love you! |
![]() ![]() Oh yeah. Hermione doesn't know it yet but shes going to REGRET her offer of 'have as MANY elf babies as you want in the house'. *lol* well good news, unless the babies all join their moms at Hogwarts when they are old enough to start working, or they can serve as Potter elves instead with daddy Dobby and the Potter clan will never be running out of elves for many generations. *lol* but maybe they should hire other elves as well so Dobbys future kids can find potential mates of their own later thats not related to them. *lol* |
![]() ![]() Love the story but cant read it because it says file not found. Please help. Want to continue reading it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed this chapter. Very funny, causing much snorting and comments from the peanut gallery. I have to follow at this point, after all its hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very funny chapter. Afforded me many smiles and chuckles. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The doctor's letter was very funny. The great brain reading it and not catching a clue upped the laugh factor. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kewl. A Potter army of elves. Unstoppable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think ole Dumbles is the one to get a surprise. |