Outstanding payback

Fantastic additions to the 2nd Task.

I love the dialogue and descriptions.

The parser discussion was wonderful.

I just remembered your third triad. Wild

Dumbles is an ass. But the kids should have spoken with the other businesses. It sounds wimpy but they are building for the long term

Okay he got it. Now he can do as my grandmother taught, lie there and think of England.

Harry must continue putting his foot down. How did Amelia miss the fake Mooney

Eh, ignore the typos. They are rare and don’t detract from the story.

Someone needs to warn Ron about what’s coming next. Sometimes, Hermione gets a little vicious. I don’t care enough to “care,” but playing fair matters.

What happened to the folks hunting the Grangers?

Oh, sigh

Time to bust up this shit show

Hmm, a story with a difference

Pimping Dobby out

Giving Ron a true around the world experience

Albus back to drugging the teachers. Better be careful.

Poor Dobby and little Dobby

There must be other males. Dumbles wants them to die out or die from torture

The girls have to give him something. On second thought do it off camera

Great punishment.

Waiting for Dumbles to get stomped

Ah, here I thought Dobby ordered sheep edibles.

Whoever has been attacking these kids is a fool. Wait until Harry can join BAMF Neville. It may save some lives because Neville is wound tight. Poor kid.

I love the interactions between the Grangers and the kids. The same goes for the other characters. You get parenting.

I still want Ron to proposition a centaur. I trust you will fulfill the request.

Good thought for the business plan

Oh this will be wild

I love seeing Neville coming in his own. The same goes for the elves.

Luna with high elevation blood makes sense.

Smart way to handle it.

Fascinating to see the rituals

Oh, Damn. A Goth Neville with BAMF attitude. I wonder if his parents passed or Magic approved transfer. I can’t wait until Albus sees the new look.