Reviews for Crimson Ink |
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![]() ![]() ![]() the whole premise of this story is pointless he first few chapters you can skip as they add nothing to the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is so cringe |
![]() ![]() ![]() surely vernon r petunia would be dead for tom to be copreal |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is actually a really good explanation to use. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think Hermione and McG got off FAR too easy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() why didn't Peter use the flame freezing charm? unlike the name suggests, it doesn't freeze flames just makes it so they aren't hot (used by wizarding folk to escape the witch hunts)... |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok, this is bugging the shit out of me (despite the fact that I like the story in general so far and LOVE that it will be Dom!Harry)... I get that Harry is smaller than he should be, but why are they treating him like a toddler? Harry is probably light years more mature than his age but they're cutting his food for him and in general treating him younger... for that matter why didn't they just sit Harry down and explain that he didn't need to cook and that he wasn't supposed to go past the wards regardless of him being able to or not? If they talked to him then he would have /learned/ instead of them just blocking him and expecting him to follow unspoken things that goes against everything he had been trained to do since dropped on the doorstep... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh that was a fun story. Manipulating Dumbledore he got his karma in the end. I like how you made things very different compared to your other stories. The sex though very little was entertaining when it was. I LOVE Vesta and her fox ways, I wish I had a magical fox for myself, he or she would get lots of cuddles. Thanks for writing this great storyline. Onward to your last story I need to read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this story is AWESOME so far. All the Slytherins are good which is a great change that I’ve never seen. So shocking that Dumbledore actually created horcruxes for himself. Almost done. Onward I read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never thought I'll live to read a story where Peter Pettigrew was GOOD and not evil. I'm rather shocked, and it's only the 2nd chapter. So far the story is off to a intriguing start. Onward I read. Take care and be safe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never mind it just needed to be refreshed lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is it supposed to show a blank page for this chapter? |
![]() ![]() Ugh, proponents of pedophilia need to be flogged then rubbed down with salt. |