Reviews for Web of Heroes (OLD Spider of Peace)
thechickenlittle chapter 2 . 6/15
love this! can't wait to read the rest!
Mr.Vegerott23 chapter 15 . 5/7
Please continue this version too.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/6
If your still making story's can you continue this one or the other one this is to good to stop
EtheriousLogia chapter 15 . 4/22
Nooooo yyyyyy
Draconeis chapter 15 . 3/11
*webslings trying not off up the landing as web snaps* Momo Toga help as they grab each hand n pull him up... Jeez almost died for a sec... Well prob not but still now i just wanna say idk if I had much of an effect cause it's been awhile n I just started adding input later I think after you started this change but I'm happy for u n us cause if this is what you write with lack of motivation than with it should be great... And I feel like I could still feel the presence of things you wanted example it seems you wanted Momo to be the main girl and Toga to be her main rival in a sense. Maybe you had an idea as to give her redemption also the way you did the Symbiote was ur idea soooooo I can't wait to see it written with ur full spin n two if u try incorporate outside info from the crowd take it completely into your own thought if u can't fit in a way that makes you happy or happy enough than don't do it we trust u to do as u want cause some joy with a great story so continue onward plus ultra ... So Toga Momo let's go... * Grabs them on both sides and WebSlings away
Draconeis chapter 14 . 3/11
Lol if Peter and the Symbiote and had learn to talk things out this would have most likely been the outcome and that Venom would have been able to learn aaaaahhh thank you for this and as for the harem birth lol my brain just goes I can just imagine Kyosei turning into his cat form as Izuku calls him Kyo talking to him while Kyo responds with just meows which some of the girls find cute meanwhile Izuku understands him from his bond so at some point Deku seems nuts Kyosei enjoys messing with Deku and only like Momo and Toga understand everything that going on... Momo because she tends to have alot of exposure around Kyo and eventually Kyosei places Abit of the Symbiote on her which allows her to communicate with Izuku and Kyosei the way they have been doing and Toga because she somehow understands due to her being insane and this just creeps out Kyo and leaves him in awe as Toga ends up being Izuku's only way to get Kyo to not push the messing around too far in their encounters which Izuku ends up being grateful for It could see the humor in it so much ... I'm dying at the prospect anywho I could just imagine after this whole harem conversation Izuku goes home to find Toga having like the calmest day with Inko while being an adorable mess... Deku almost loses his mind when he sees it and questions Toga in secret and he finds out there is a more sane cute adorable mess version of Toga which baffles him but is then confirmed by Kyosei that she seems like this when she gets calm and that only seems to happen around Izuku also that in this state of mind she has an actual attraction n liking to Izuku unlike her insane murder rampage psychopath state which would make for some interesting reading... Snickers Izuku sitting tryna figure out which is which only a daily basis and than Redemption arc because we gotta have one right hehe ahh and even if none of that happens this is still great hope you enjoy the commentary and wacky ideas coming from imagining these things that I'm suggesting
Draconeis chapter 13 . 3/11
Lml Yandere mode Toga activated and dang I know she prob not getting in the harem even if she did have a redemption arc but I can mentally hope n lml look three of the sinster six in the same room and Toga and Deku are the cause of it that's that's some heavy ish... Oo and Gobby can't forget about The Old Green Goblin the nightmares Izuku will have shudder well this has gone from zero to a hundred real quick but I do have one gripe mentally it's been bugging me the USJ invasion Tsuyu Mineta and Deku didn't get to bond which in mind kinda suck especially if Tsuyu is part of the harem but you prob have a way to fix that .. I believe in you just happens to be something I loved in Boku no hero but keep up the good work forward On WebSlingers
Draconeis chapter 12 . 3/11
First of all him Mina yes and if you enjoy the pairing I suggest you read QuirkQuartz stories does this pairing justice at least in my eyes and I personally promote Awkward Energy as the go to story especially if you caught up through the manga as well... And I'm happy you did this All Might Izuku scene I wish they had done this in the story if not this arc than definitely the Rescue art it is a very cool scene to picture and you did it right if it was ever done
Draconeis chapter 11 . 3/10
Awww him and Momo that's legit his Gwen awwwwww heart warmed n this should interesting
Draconeis chapter 10 . 3/10
Also cute moments I wonder if Momo will always get a ride back home when Ochako gets a ride to school
Draconeis chapter 10 . 3/10
Lml is it weird I feel bad for Bakugou I mean I know the strength difference but still its abit much it doesnt even have abit of adjustment which is fine cause all it does is make me fear how much him bonding with the symbiote is gonna suck for a whole lotta people
Draconeis chapter 9 . 3/10
OP Izuku should have kept that in mind somewhere and venom dont be super duper evil kay
Draconeis chapter 8 . 3/10
Very much Impressed and entertained by the idea of deku spiderman vs All Might lol Superman vs Spiderman all over again hehe and Venom being existent I really hope that the sensible hosy after deku if there is one has to be Bakugou unless Bakugou's disdain can push it away but I mean like Bakugou is likeperfect for the Venom Symbiote... Wouldnt be surprised if it was submissive to Kacchan when bonded to him
Draconeis chapter 7 . 3/10
Im happy his spider powers add to the story and make some changes so far but not so many that it completely changes the story not that changing the story would be a terrible thing just that its interesting and cool that you didnt change a whole lot as of yet
Draconeis chapter 4 . 3/10
Lml All Might using that brain and lml why does Momo feel like a Gwen of this story or maybe Felicia hehe oooo flashback good old flashbacks when I first read it
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