omg is awesomeeee , thanx for this.

I really liked the feel of your writing.
Three chapters are still better than no chapters.

The parallels between the two different futures, Robin's and Lucina's, was really tasty.
I liked how Robin handled totally-not-Robin's stalking too.

Thank you for writing. I really enjoyed it.

This is great. I'm so glad I found it. Wouldn't Raven, (who I'm guessing is male Robin) look similar to Robin? And why can't he take Robin's place? Did he lose his Mark of Grima or something..? I can't wait to see Robin interact with the Sheperds! Especially with the full knowledge that she is a Plegian. And the fact that she traveled across time, it's going to be so interesting. Your writing is wonderful. I really enjoyed reading the past three chapters.

oh p.s. what the couple's you plan to do? who are you going to pair with who?

oh yes another amazing chapter, glad to finally see where the real story starts. also, I wanted to thank you for giving me an idea for a fanfic. Ive always wanted to write a what if story with two robins (male and female obvs), but couldn't decide on a decent name for the two, but Raven and Robin sound pretty good so I'll probably borrow those names for my story. thanks, I'll mske sure to give you credit :D look forward to the next chapter

really great story! XD

More? plzz :)

No idea where you're taking this, but... ooooh. *leans forward in anticipation*

The premise is indeed pretty good.

There's an intensity to it too, but that might be because it is in first person. I've got a few ideas on how it's going to flow, but I'm eagerly awaiting what you plan to put on the table.

Good luck and have fun.

I'm gonna guess Raven is Morgan.

Interesting premise and good writing; looking forward to more.

Yay you updated! fantastic as the first one and this one has a cliffhanger! omgosh I look forward to the next one

This seems cool! I love your word choices and how you phrase them to make me feel like I'm actually listening to someone's(namely, a witty tactician's) thoughts. Good job! Continue this as soon as you can please!

! I love this! I'm so glad you're choosing to reimagine/expand the future!Ylisse universe. I love the little bits of world building like the universities. I imagine the two colleges have really intense sports matches haha. Gosh, I can't wait to see Robin land in the past. I wonder how she'll cope with being a tactician...and I can't wait to see Chrom because I'm Chrobin garbage. I can't express how excited I am about this story without being incoherent ahhfkfkakfjh

Also was that Ricken in the shop?

This sounds like a Novel that I've read sometime, a girl is trying to write a biography about a famous musician, only to find a journal that sent her to the past and meet the musician. Regardless, this is definitely interesting so far, and I hope the next chapter is just as entertaining.