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  Anonymous chapter 7 . 4/13/2003 Ahem... I will apologize ahead of time for the flames I am about to give you: THAT WAS THE WORST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ! IT DOESN'T EVEN MAKE SENSE! HERMIONE AND DRACO HATE EACH OTHER! WHAT WOULD YOUR MOTHER SAY(LOL)? J.K. ROWLING WOULD BE ASHAMED OF YOU! Okay, I feel better now, and will tell you how to improve the story. For one thing, you could revise it to get rid of the kissing scene, because what if they were caught? Second, you could just have something a little less... dramatic. Like, having Draco simply tell Hermione that he likes her and giving her a little kiss on the cheek. Not so much having them sleep with each other right off the bat(Hermione is better than that). |
 heavengurl899 chapter 11 . 4/13/2003 this is really good! |
| heavengurl899 chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 lordy lordy women keep on going! NO CHEESEYNESS! lol its really funny though...sorry i didnt review those other chapters my computer wouldnt let me! write more asap heavengurl899 |
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 4/13/2003 Ok, good story so far-except the ending of chapter three. To be perfectly honest, it was stupid(I don't mean to cruel, it just is). Maybe you can say something like: Harry had to hold Ron back by his robes to keep him from punching Malfoy. |
| heavengurl899 chapter 5 . 4/13/2003 hahahahahahahahhahaha this was a good chapter. Draco did seem a bit weak though, but never the less it was good! Plz dont make ur story all "Oh Draco I love you!" and "Oh Hermione I regret saying anything bad about you!" All that fluff makes me really sick! blah! im crazy anyway really good so far! |
| karly chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 that was so great! the way u ended it with snape walking in saying "so everyone what did i miss" was such a good idea! i cant wait for the next chappie! |
| Captain Oblivious chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 *snicker* Now, I have to wonder if she's REALLY telling the truth or if she's just pouring her revenge on them. I'm leaning towards revenge because of your hints. . . boy, I must sound very stupid. Update soon! |
| Lily of the Shadow chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 0.o;OKAY! lol, UPDATE PLEASE! |
| heavengurl899 chapter 3 . 4/13/2003 lol plz keep on writing |
| heavengurl899 chapter 2 . 4/13/2003 hey! lol by the way i am heavengurl899 i am crazy and i am IN LUV with all d/her ff! |
| heavengurl899 chapter 1 . 4/13/2003 this is good plz keep on writing. |
| Alexial chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 hahaha great one! go ginny! |
| Queen Li chapter 12 . 4/13/2003 LOL that was priceless! I loved it! |
| not done baking chapter 11 . 4/11/2003 good job |
| Queen Li chapter 11 . 4/11/2003 :-) I thought this was very original. I love it so far and hope you continue! |