Reviews for Under the Veil |
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Phoenixcatch7 chapter 65 . 7/18/2022 Every time you post it's an inspiration to me, who is really struggling with putting chapters out of my own fics. Never give up! |
PoseidonDemon chapter 64 . 7/15/2022 Still a very good story, but still the same tense congruity problem here and there... Also, Viktor is from Bulgaria. They don't say "ja"; that's a commonplace GERMANIC sound for "yes" (anything starting with a "yuh" sound). Slavic languages all share "da". |
Mytjojo chapter 64 . 6/19/2022 This fanfic is great and I can't wait to see how it evolves. You did a great job with sans's personality and payed attention to the two most important details, 1. sans loves puns, 2. sans only talks in lowercase |
codeninja676 chapter 64 . 6/8/2022 Love these little slice of life chapters, and I'm really excited to see ol Snake face get dunked on when he finally escapes the cauldron. |
Guest chapter 64 . 6/5/2022 ? Omg? I didn’t get notifications for the past two chapters? I’m sitting here wondering why you haven’t updated in ages and it turns out I just wasn’t getting notified? What? Bruh. Bruhhh. Anyways, I really enjoyed the ‘new’ chapters. Really glad I decided to revisit this fic on a whim. Funny as always. (As someone who has also fallen into a submas hole and can’t get out, I would be super interested in seeing a Pokémon fic from you. I mean, you probably don’t want to start another project, understandable, but still.) |
Samscipher chapter 15 . 6/4/2022 I love how sans is like: aye so, there’s a soul in that thing And everyone doesn’t really question him and just is like: oh um ok….so it’s a horcrux….. |
LeahLovesPotterUndertale chapter 64 . 5/30/2022 All I have to say for this chapter: Sport ball. Sans, you are a hoot. |
Dirtyreeds chapter 64 . 5/20/2022 This fanfic is soooo good! |
7sky chapter 64 . 5/18/2022 were this a completed story, it'd join my list of favorites. until then, it shall have to remain followed. I really got nothing else. |
7sky chapter 35 . 5/17/2022 in the light spectrum, green is not a primary color. it is often confused with the red blue green that video displays use, however, in the spectrum itself, it is red blue yellow that make the primary colors. |
Jostanos chapter 64 . 5/15/2022 How may things turn out? Who may Harry go with to the Yule Ball? The answers to these question and more when Under the Veil continues! :) |
MarioMan314RBLX chapter 64 . 5/15/2022 Finally I'm going to review this thing. 64 chapters, one per month...This whole thing is a wild ride that most people would give up on. You're not most people. You're special. Plus this story is a HUGE success, both in terms of views and in terms of how good it is. Don't give up on this. It's great. Sans meeting Sirious, Sans breaking him out and killing dementors, followed by stopping the Death Eater attack single-handedly made everyone question who he was. And then he sneaks into Hogwarts, where he has his own giant problems known as his wand of choice. What is the exact number of dents he has made in ceilings with that thing? The tournament with Cassius being chosen instead of Cedric due to Sans's help, and Sans doing a bunch of suspicious things in front of students- mostly Cassius, but still a bit of others, like vanishing in front of Hermione or dumping water. Still. This fanfic is amazing, please keep this thing up. |
dog1056 chapter 27 . 5/14/2022 I'm rereading and I just went from laughing at Sans' "I'm a skeleton from another dimension" thing to instant sadness when I got the Papyrus hadn't seen Sans sentence. First freaking senteence, 1 sentence is all it took for you to wipe that smile off my face! I got emotional whiplash! Not a bad thing of course but you suck! (joking) |
dog1056 chapter 18 . 5/14/2022 Ah, I'd forgotten quite how much I really loved this story & it makes me laugh or snort laugh so much. I love puns and this is just punderful! |
kylC chapter 64 . 5/13/2022 thanks for the update! super excited to see fleur being included into the team planning, and i love the sense of camaraderie developing between all these characters. i grow more and more attached to cassius with each chapter, and if (when) anything seriously bad ever happens to him im Going to Scream. i wonder if he’s ever going to bring up all those pills that sans has been given and has very clearly not taken? can’t imagine that going well for sans, depending on the audience at hand. anyways, this is the first time that ive been caught up to this fic in literal years and i just wanted to let you know that! this fic so fun! thank you so much for continuing to stick with it! i’ll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter |