Yo
Nice chapter again. I hope you continue very soon.

I didn't even think about the Yule Ball. Sans there just seems.. off to me. But, y'know, this whole fic is kinda... off. In a good way of course, but still.. Also, "delicate sensibilities." I love it!

To be fair, after his LONG stretch of watching the world just fucking die over and over, he should have a lot of good luck and karma built up.

A game of cards?

Why was Snape acting so odd?

Viktor is improving his English thanks to Hermione.

I think we would be vey up 50/50 between havign a peaceful Christmas, or go to the Yule Ball to keep an eye on Harry now that the timeline has been altered. Either way, he'll probably choose one and feel as if he should have doen the other.

Also what is with Snape and that hourglass?

Oh my god I didn't realize how much I'd missed this fic! So glad for the update, definitely gonna have to go back a reread soon to refresh myself but that's hardly an inconvenience with how enjoyable the whole thing is! Lol

Oh! Snape was monitoring for poly juice! That's a pretty simple way to do it, but very effective lol. I wonder why he's sus? Ah - after the first task, I remember. I wonder what disguise he's going to check for next?

Lmao poor cass XD.

Always hype when you get to name drop a line from canon.

Still having fun reading your story. I’ll be sorry to catch up to your writing and have to wait for the next chapter.

The ongoing pads is defeated by doorknobs is hilarious but I’ve had several dogs that can open doors and two that required the constant use of door locks because they could open round door knobs and let themselves out when they wished.

Incidentally, none of them closed the door when they went out or came back inside even the one that was taught to close the door in cue! Much like small children, once they have opened the door it is a thing of the past not to be considered until it is once again in their way. So self closing doors are a must have addition.

Hello! I've "binge-read" your fanfiction in the span of a week and I absolutely LOVE IT. I'll get the only negative point out of the way straightaway: tense congruity. You oftentimes jump from using a past tense to using a present tense in a manner that's not congruent because you're still speaking about the same thing taking place at the same time in the story's chronology (for example (not that you used this sentence but I can't be arsed combing through all 62 chapters again to find one)): "Sans looked at him with knowing eyes. He is a clever skeleton after all." You do that kind of stuff sometimes, though the proper usage would be to use "he was a clever skeleton after all".) Other than that though, this is an absolutely brilliant story. You have a varied vocabulary, you write in a descriptive manner (the lack of which I often find myself complaining about as far as other fanfiction authors are concerned), and all your characters and their dialogues feel very "organic" and true to themselves. The way you integrated Sans in this new world and your ideas about how all of that works really hit the mark for me; I was so eager to know what would happen next and what you would make of a particular thing that I looked for a plugin to read the story out to me with an automated voice while I was working out. All in all, an almost perfect performance, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I really love this story! I like the rules you are using for sans’ abilities and I’ve kinda adopted them for my own head cannon! I can’t wait to see what happens with Snape and everything!

It's been a while, but it's nice to see more of the Undertale side. Things are progressing!

Finding a neutral ground is good for negotiations.

Thank you for a new chapter.

Yes, yes. Tuesday is VERY foreboding. Especially since. . . I READ IT ON A TUESDAY!