Reviews for Ruined
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2014
That's weird
Oo chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
I think this story was written with an extra chromosone...
Roxius chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
MegaDaffy chapter 1 . 3/12/2006
Uh...O.K. I think that was kind of depressing and questionable. Questionable meaning I don't think I got the whole point of that other than Mag forcing Linear to do something that I prefer not to go into. I'd write more on why Mag becomes who he is in the story. Not a bad start though.
Jamestown401 chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Yeah! That's it! Kill Linear! God, I hate Linear.

Good fic. I love it when people do this to a character I hate.
D-chi chapter 1 . 8/28/2005
That was very... very... special.
Luciado chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Mag is so mean...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
o_0 *fanits*
Furry Elf chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
meh. it needs another chapter before I hate it. :P
Ekoko chapter 1 . 3/22/2004
I don't know WHY people flamed this. It's an example of someone getting their ideas out in the open.
Not to be mean, but you arne't the greatest writer, but even if it was evil, I DID like the idea.
Kyone chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
That was pitiful. If this is your sick, demented way of getting reviews, I laugh at you. At least I don't do that. Were the characters on drugs or something? That was so terrible, I seriously do not adore you. I hated it. And I don't know why you did that to Linear. I don't like you at all...
Happichu chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
uh...err...that was sorta freaky. ...but I like the blood. .;
meteorsummoner chapter 1 . 10/22/2003
What a weird story. Did Mag go crazy or something? Maybe he's on drugs? But it is different, scary and therefore interesting. Crazy too.
Pyroseer chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
Good for linear. i dont like her anyway... tho that was a bit weird tho
Lily chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
OMG! HOW COULD YOU! Well i dont flame people because i dont think thats proper. How could u write something like that about Linear? She's so cute! Well i'm not going to lie to you and say that i like ur fic because i didnt, but i'm not going to flame you for it either. I didnt like your story and if you could please take it out! Linear doesnt deserve that!
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