Reviews for MVP
soccermom101113 chapter 30 . 8/20
I loved it, sorry it's over. You did a fantastic job on this story. I'm from the St. Louis area and you were correct with everything. Thanks for sharing!
hawkeye1958 chapter 18 . 7/2
hawkeye1958 chapter 15 . 7/1
Oh for a kiss like that, sigh
petmom1213 chapter 30 . 6/30
petmom1213 chapter 29 . 6/30
This is an awesome story. Edward's family is so funny. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for continuing to write and for allowing us to read your wonderful stories.

Mickey Hall
hawkeye1958 chapter 11 . 6/30
Great story
alainaroullier chapter 30 . 6/24
Woot woot!
morena.davidson.3 chapter 30 . 6/23
Loved it. Glad I found this one. Off now to read more of your stuff. :) Thanks for sharing. xo
alainaroullier chapter 12 . 6/23
Edward is being an idiot. Hot then cold then hot again.
alainaroullier chapter 7 . 6/23
This is just nuts! One misunderstanding after another.
alainaroullier chapter 6 . 6/23
Ah, so maybe Brandon is their mom’s maiden name?
alainaroullier chapter 4 . 6/23
I can’t imagine a cheating Alice!
alainaroullier chapter 3 . 6/23
Aha! Now the mysterious rudeness has been answered but is Alice actually his wife?
alainaroullier chapter 1 . 6/23
Poor Bella! How mysterious that she was outright lying dismissed? Hmmm
divyvicki chapter 30 . 6/23
That was just wonderful! If u ever want a contest entry, you should write an out take of either their wedding, the World Series with Jackie, the first season with the calming room, the birth of their first child, or when she told him about the new addition after the Hall Of Fame induction! I’m just not ready to leave these characters yet!
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