| Reviews for MVP |
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   71star chapter 24 . 2/28/2018 Uhhhh... Still nothing on the living arrangements... Hmmmm... |
| 71star chapter 22 . 2/26/2018 Well, Edward took that better than I expected... But, I'm sure he'll try to talk her into staying... Or at least I'd hope he would... |
| 71star chapter 21 . 2/26/2018 Don't lose focus Bella... You gotta ask Edward what's up with your job... Love that Bella got Jackie to enjoy the game with everyone... |
| 71star chapter 20 . 2/26/2018 Oh shit! I love the way you made his family... |
| 71star chapter 19 . 2/26/2018 Hopefully she lets Edward know about her apartment hunting too... Damn, that'll send him over the edge... |
| 71star chapter 18 . 2/26/2018 Yes! Loving this side of Edward... NOW... To get rid of Victoria... UGH! |
| princeselisa chapter 30 . 2/8/2018 Such a great story. I truly loved it. Thanks for sharing! |
| naomi chapter 24 . 1/10/2018 I know this story is all finished and everything, but I just wanted to say I really love it this point (I'm sure I'll continue to love it to the end!). As a HUGE baseball fan (but not of the Cards, sorry!), I really like that you added a bit of truth in the All-Star Game (it being in Miami and that Yadier Molina was there), but it also would have been fun if you had Edward in the Home Run Derby, since you mention earlier in the story that he led MLB in home runs. I just wanted to point out that home-field advantage for the World Series is no longer determined by the League that won the All-Star Game. Now, it's just the team that had the best record for the season. Anyway, that's just me being super picky. Regardless, it's a great story! |
| Guest chapter 10 . 12/13/2017 I loved his analogy of baseball pitches to women. |
| Riam chapter 30 . 12/11/2017 I just finished your lovely story. You are a great writer, thank you so much for sharing your talent. |
| SLKerouac chapter 30 . 12/8/2017 So loved this story. Edward had to learn to trust again. Bella was the right person for him. She showed him that she was so different from anyone else he had in his life. Thanks for writing! |
| Guest chapter 30 . 11/25/2017 I really enjoyed this beautiful story. You are a talented writer! |
| SunflowersAtSunset chapter 30 . 11/5/2017 Awe the Lion️I absolutely loved this story even though I literally dropped my jaw with the “backend” talk! That was a good one. I absolutely loved this story and how it puts in light the reality of children with special needs. You have literally created an amazing story! Warm Regards from Florida |
| Guest chapter 30 . 11/5/2017 Oh. It was just the sweetest belward story I ever read. |
| Deseree chapter 30 . 11/2/2017 I loved this good job! |