Gah...Edward is so HOT and flirty and I love it! Needed a baseballward with the World Series going on right now and this is so GOOD!

Finally she knows he's not married to Alice hahahaha I love that he admitted he was flirting with her...onto the next ch!

Dammnnnnn Edward flirting is HOT!

He's checking her out AND he wants her to watch his game...hehehe Loving this story so far!

Hahahahahaha Oh Jasper!

Awesome chapter! I was hoping for more of a jerkward but that's ok haha

Interestinggggggggg

YAY! A surprise Edward point of view, woo~hoo! That was really great. The reader got everything from him in that chapter. How much he loves and adores Bella. How madly and deeply he is love with her. We got to learn what they did to Victoria and how she was ruined from her actions. How the Star will be sued. We saw Edward's view of his love for Jackie and how wonderful Lauren is. Both as a mom and as an ex. How he acts with his family too. It was wonderful. Best of all, we got the proposal. That proposal was fantastic. I loved that he had Jackie and Lauren's help and how perfectly it all was. Yes, absolutely fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing your imagination here. ~Christy

Wow, that was quite a time jump and a lot of missed things. Their engagement, the wedding, his World Series and their daughter. We did learn all of those things happened in this chapter but, did not get to read any of it. Interesting.

Wow, all hell broke loose and then was fixed all in the same chapter. Thank you for doing that. I am so very glad that they caught Victoria in all of it. Even more glad that it all came from Edward's phone, not Bella's like she thought. I really hope that they can fix this in the public eye, because all of that was horrible. Even worse, they included his son in that crap. How effing low of scum are those people. Saying he is a bad father, when he a great father. I really hope that Jackie is in a private school and the kids are mostly like him. The last thing he needs is people talking about his father and teasing him. He may or may not understand it all. Any child of eight would have issues understanding this, let alone an autistic one. I'm so glad that Edward went and found Bella. Explaining everything to her. The drunk message carrier certainly did not help anything at all. You did a really good job in this chapter with how it all played out. You got the reader worked up and so worried, wondering how Edward could even think Bella would do this to him. Only to calm the reader right back down, with him never believing it was her. Whew, that was a bit of a ride.

What the hell happened that night in Vegas? None of them remember anything. Wonderful.

He was being such a dick to her for moving out. I am glad he finally came around and realized he was being such dick. Apologizing and everything. I really liked how much they showed their love in this chapter. How they've become so much closer. That last sentence was an awfully ominous . . . lovely. I have a feeling what I'd suspected all along, Victoria setting Bella up to take a public fall somehow, bringing Edward right down at the same time, is about to happen.

I rather liked that Bella sort of hid from Victoria and the meeting Edward was having with her. It was interesting that said she was happy that she could get back to her real job to Edward but, I have a feeling if she would've been able to find Bella that morning, she would've ripped into her. Glad Alice was there to thwart her. The auction did not go as I had expected, as I thought for sure Victoria would win. I guess Riley wasn't part of Victoria's plans after all. Poor man was humiliated in front of everyone. He made a very good point, if she was just trying to drive up the bids, she would have bid on any other player, when she did not. These are the things that Bella needs to tell Edward is happening so he can be super careful around Victoria. He seems a lot naive when it comes to Victoria. I am really happy the foundation made so much money. It was very sweet of both Alice and Bella to share and give their prizes to the other bidders. I loved Lorraine, she was great.

Alice was fun in this chapter and I am glad that she and Bella get along so well. They will spend quite a bit of time together when the guys are at away games. And, when they both go on the road together with their guys. I am still worried about Riley but, after the way Victoria was with him I am now thinking that she is using him like she uses every other man out there. I really liked what Edward has planned for her involvement at LPF and their talk about her position and salary. I do not think Victoria is anywhere near done with Edward. I think she is plotting and planning. At least Bella is aware of her wanting Edward, even if he feels Victoria just doesn't want anyone to have him. No, I am with Bella and she definitely is not happy she was dumped. Now, when she learns that she won't be part of LPF she may lose her head. I know she plans to outbid any female, or male, on Edward at auction. I wouldn't put it past her to drug Edward and then send Bella photos of them in bed.

Awww, both Edward and Bella were sad to see his family go. I'm happy that Bella has Angela, as she's a very good friend. I liked that she was happy to be shopping for anything other than wedding stuff. That made me giggle. Very happy that Bella found a dres, shoes, bag and lingerie, yay! Him coming in from the game earlier certainly turned yummy. I think he liked finding her in that bathtub. Yay, he asked her to go with him to Florida.