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   Shazzeer chapter 15 . 9/10/2023 Edward base some great music to play when he enters the field next time ;). Their date went well. And I would t wanna be recognised everywhere I went. Everyone butting in on dates or stopping me when grocery shopping and other things. Edward just declared he would have a hard time leaving due to Bella being left at home ;) |
| Shazzeer chapter 14 . 9/10/2023 Bella deserves the money for coming up with the name and the auction!. Victoria is a sore loser! |
| Shazzeer chapter 13 . 9/10/2023 Again with the no talking, he would’ve known Jake was just a friend and gay if he didn’t have all the rules. Now, did he just fly in for the meeting or was that just a ruse ;). Also I would react the same way if I saw a woman in a towel in his room on the computer. Also, it’s rude to let someone sleep in Bella’s room without asking her, even if she’s not using it over the summer! |
| Shazzeer chapter 12 . 9/10/2023 Bella is right, he doesn’t get to sweet talk her and then flip around and try to push her away. He said it’s best they keep it professional… so that’s what it will be! |
| Shazzeer chapter 11 . 9/10/2023 Almost every major payer in any sport has a whorephace!. But Edward seems to be over that but Bella’s worries are not to be taken lightly, everyone has a past and Bella doesn’t wanna get hurt. And he is her boss so… |
| Shazzeer chapter 10 . 9/10/2023 Yeah, bet they would’ve kissed if Alice and Jazz hadn’t interrupted! So Edward thinks that Bella is the worst kind of pitcher XD. She might make him strike out ;) |
| Shazzeer chapter 9 . 9/10/2023 Ha, that was Edward flirting? I can totally see that Bella didn’t realise as she thought he was married to Alice and that Alice was cheating on Edward with Jazz. The guys better not spill any info, NDA:s are no joke! |
| Shazzeer chapter 8 . 9/10/2023 Phew! Finally she knows that Alice is his sister and Edward isn’t married to anyone. So is Jackie his kid or someone elese? Does Lauren have full custody if Jackie is their son? |
| Shazzeer chapter 7 . 9/10/2023 They need to clear that miss understanding! And I also don’t like Victoria, snotty bitch! |
| Shazzeer chapter 6 . 9/10/2023 Yeah, she should just talk to Alice, and Alice will tell the truth. Their mom married Dr Cullen, Edward took his last name and Alice kept Brandon. What wouldn’t I give to be in that jacuzzi * drools * |
| Shazzeer chapter 5 . 9/10/2023 Ha, she came home to a pissy Edward cuz he couldn’t find his lucky socks XD. And she could just talk to Alice and she would tell everything. I wouldn’t say no to having my hands all over him ;). |
| Shazzeer chapter 4 . 9/10/2023 Poor Bella, but I would also misunderstand and jump to conclusions as they haven’t told her anything! She missed the game, but Ang and Ben’s wedding is more important! |
| Shazzeer chapter 3 . 9/10/2023 No wonder he called her a dirt bunny when she said she was looking for number 13 and that’s his number XD. Still wondering if Jackie is his kid or just his nephew. And is he and Alice married or siblings? |
| Shazzeer chapter 2 . 9/10/2023 Alice pulled the strings and roped Bella in. I wouldn’t say no to a salary the was $1000 a week! Even after taxes, gimme the money!. Just wait until she sees Edward and he throws a bitch fit! I wonder if the kid is his or maybe Em and Rose’s? ;) |
| Shazzeer chapter 1 . 9/10/2023 Ha, what an ass! He at least could’ve given her a chance!. Alice and Bella will be great friends! |