| Reviews for MVP |
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   sosueme chapter 22 . 5/2/2017 Loved it all! |
| sosueme chapter 17 . 5/1/2017 Great humor writing! OMG - back end butt stuff! This bella is hilarious. |
| sosueme chapter 15 . 5/1/2017 Steamy kiss kiss ;) |
| sosueme chapter 12 . 5/1/2017 This Bella rocks! Give him hell, he deserves it for confusing her. |
| KitSmitty chapter 30 . 4/23/2017 Enjoyed the story so much! Thank you. |
| Twlightforever chapter 30 . 4/21/2017 Excellent story! Loved it! |
| Nicoconsd chapter 29 . 4/21/2017 Oh man I forgot the complete awesomeness that is the stories you write. I am so glad to have found you again and look forward to reading anything and everything you continue to provide. I hate to admit this but honestly I hate baseball... To me it's like watching glue dry but after reading this I almost want to go and give a game another whirl... Thanks for a wonderful adventure :) |
| Jet Lee chapter 29 . 4/20/2017 Beautiful,funny and very different than any other stories I read in fanfiction! |
| Nicoconsd chapter 13 . 4/20/2017 See 3am and I'm still reading... works going to be a nightmare tomorrow. :) |
| Nicoconsd chapter 2 . 4/20/2017 Well hello... I was a bit afraid to jump in knowing that I will be staying up to god knows when reading cause I can never put your stories down... but here I am at midnight and I caved and started :). This chapter cracked me up cause it reminded me of many years ago when I ran to Starbucks to get a drink. There I am in the parking lot checking out this really sexy car thinking damn that's pretty... then this guy comes out of bucks catches me totally checking out his car. I look up and think ohhhh he's hot but his car is even better. He smirks at me with a shit eating grin knowing that I have no idea who he is but that I liked his car... I go into bucks and find out oh year that's the lead pitcher for the padres... oops! LOL :) |
| sury.h chapter 30 . 4/19/2017 Loved it! Thank you! |
| crunchinn x ice chapter 30 . 4/16/2017 loved your story! |
| marigold123 chapter 30 . 4/13/2017 Great story! So happy you're back! Than you for writing. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 4/10/2017 I'm loving this story, but I think she's too forgiven towards him. He keeps treating her like crap and expecting her to just forgive him because he said sorry or gave her flowers, but he still keeps hurting her feelings. She needs to make him work for it. Men have the tendency of not learning their lesson from hurting you when they don't have to earn your forgiveness or in some cases trust back. |
| Evelyne-raconte chapter 30 . 4/9/2017 Excellent fiction. You enlighten all my weekend with this beautiful story. I loved it. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination with us. |