Reviews for A Box of Matches for a New Life
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 3 . 8/17/2016
Very good
Koka chapter 2 . 8/13/2016
Heyyyyyy, this is a good story.
I have a question.
Will there be other One Piece characters in this story or just Luffy and Ace?
I'll be back...
RedHeadsRock1010 chapter 2 . 8/13/2016
RedHeadsRock1010 chapter 1 . 8/13/2016
Okay, this is super cute and I am in love with your writing style. I hope you update this story too! It's just as fantastic as all your others! I can't help but feel sad about Luffy's crew though. If Luffy is here now (or reborn as Harry), then they had to deal with discovering he died. Did they continue on their adventures?
FireD.Rion chapter 2 . 8/11/2016
Your writing looks fine, and I like how Hagrid noticed the difference in Luffy before and after.
I also like your ideas of Haki. Luffy got his when he was 17, while Ace unlocked his at 10. Does this mean that Ace will unlock it when Luffy actually faces Voldemort the first time, and almost dies?
Ooh, would the Brother's protection of love while dying work like Lilly Potter's Love protection?
Will be looking forward to the different parts! Thanks for writing this!
Guest 2 chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
You're welcome! :D I really like how Ace has flashbacks of the war and doesn't want to deal with them as that event must have been traumatising. The lifeline! XD I'm curious how Snape will deal with this Luffy. Luffy thinking everything is awesome XD
Thank you for updating!
Elfyliane chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
Pourquoi ais-je l'impression que les Dursley vont finir en barbec dans pas longtemps ...
Ender the multiverse Detective chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
Very good
Oc2uber chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
This is a very interesting concept! Please do continue with this :) Btw, I think it'd be amazing if Ace and Luffy met Draco - but not Draco-Draco, but Draco-Sabo ;) you gettin' me? The ASL trio, back to wreck havoc on a world that doesn't know what's coming to them XP
CallisaDawn chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
Im very much enjoying this! I love reimcarmation focs like this~ and unfortunately i have a hard time finding them.. if you have any recommendations send em my why yeah?
Angel Winx chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
Is it only Ace and Luffy reincarnated? Or will there be others?
poemado chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
I am sad to know you not going to do more books but it is a lot of work so I understand. Like the chapter hope luffy and ace have a heart to heart at some point
Kanda Yuuki chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
I think Ace is going to explode once he found out about Luffy's home life...
WriterKillsReader chapter 2 . 8/9/2016
Okay, I won't lie - I expected Ace to set something on fire like Dean (or was it Seamus?) always does xD
Niiiice chapter! I really like how Ace sees Luffy smiling everything off and just thinks that it can't be really so easy for him. Also that he still is the older brother in a way!
The parts where Ace thinks about his death are so perfect! Like of course he thinks "if I had X back then" or "this reminds me of...".
So great chapter! Yus!
Bob the Almighty chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
:) I like this. I feel sorry for Hogwarts, but I can tell it'll be a great adventure.
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