Brilliant! Highly enjoyed this!

This was brilliant!

Fav'd, and I love that last line!

Best and most logical handling og the dementors and the Dursleys I've ever read. Thank you for sharing your art with us.

Lol, fantastic story!

Absolutely great story!

That was quite the metamorphosis. Was good to see Harry wise up. A stupid Dumbledore is not something that’s seen often. That was different and well done. That ending with Hermione giving tests to a wannabe dark one was funny. Thanks for an entertaining read.

Excellent attention to a Gryffindor? Go Minerva!

This was very enjoyable to read. Your last line made me laugh but I guess I should give credit to Inusitatus. Although you were the one that included it in this story so half credit goes to you.

Lots of fun! I enjoyed it immensely. :)

Good story, though I do have issue with Harry's rant on 'An it harm none, do as thou wilt'. Seems to me that you'd have to go out of your way to abuse the definitions of that phrase in order to give it negative context: as I read it, it is more a counter against draconian laws that punish people for victimless crimes than a rallying call for evil actions.
tl;dr: Harry went on a very long stretch to rant against a moral philosophy of "do no harm". What a wanker.

The last paragraph alone makes it worth to reread the story from time to time. "Can you promise not to get a boyfriend for the next month or so?" This question, the follow-up explanation, and Hermione's reaction are among the sweetest I've ever read.

Hilarious and very enjoyable. Thanks for writing )

i don't know I've read both and i thought yours was good too many travlers is my favorite sorry

Very well done indeed!

It seems rather a pity that, after McGonagall and Harry reached an accord in their dialogue following Harry's wounding of Draco and his cronies, she was dragged down instead of given the opportunity to rise to the challenge of becoming an effective Headmistress. But given that she reportedly didn't take what was left to her and put more effort into becoming a better Head of House than she had been for at least the last five years, perhaps it's just as well.

My only complaint about this story is how thoroughly Umbridge was defanged, to the point of having roughly as much consequence to Harry and to Hogwarts as a whole as Binns did. Harry rather blatantly defied her, even though it was a passive defiance, by refusing to attend the detention she assigned him or to respond when called upon in class. And yet she did nothing in response to such defiance? In canon, she had Harry taken off the Quidditch team as part of her efforts to crush his spirit, and created the Inquisitorial Squad with the full knowledge and likely the intention that they harass Harry and his allies. Here... nothing.