Reviews for Insomnia
fandomflier15 chapter 1 . 8/9/2016
Can you write more? Helpless Tony is cute and you capture it great.
JayRain chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
I could just picture Tony all through this. The movements, the motions, the staring at his work and using it to escape... and also to try to figure out what's broken so he can fix it. Tony himself is this sort of microcosm, in that he can't quite pinpoint what's wrong with himself right now, but if he could just figure it out he could fix it; and he looks for what's wrong with the world thinking if he can just find the broken piece he can fix that, too. This is just a glimpse into one night as Tony Stark, but it really shows who he is and how he's struggling in a powerful way.
Ellenka chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
"He can fix it, he knows he can, if he can only wrap his head around exactly what is broken." ugh yes, this is what it comes down to. this was so powerful and so OUCH *hugs*
aliena wyvern chapter 1 . 8/6/2016
My poor Tony :'( I always had the impression that he was in fact a sad clown, hiding deep trauma behind his careless behaviour, and you write that perfectly.