|Reviews for IATB: The Rise|
| Lukoshi chapter 27 . 9/26
All in all an enjoyable read, I think it started getting a little out of hand after the Yule ball but it was still a great meshing of two fandoms. I know it has been a while but I hope you do end up writing Unification War at some point as I will be one of the first to read it. Cheers and all the best!
| Lukoshi chapter 19 . 9/26
Honestly the relationship between Cedric and Susan weirds the hell out of me. Not a fan of that pairing at all. Otherwise that was a dope battle at Azkaban, hopefully Harry unlocks more of the knowledge the father left behind and doesn't get his ass handed to him so easily again.
| Lukoshi chapter 17 . 9/25
The badass codename Valkyries almost makes up for harry's lame lightsaber. Hopefully his codename gets to be Odin
| Lukoshi chapter 3 . 9/24
Ugh really? You take his gorgeous looking Revan lightsaber design and give him a useless crossguard lightsaber like Kylo Ren? Truly disappointing :( There is literally no purpose to having a three emitter lightsaber and now I have to imagine him fighting sith while looking like a twat
| halla chapter 19 . 9/5
Nox isn't intimidating at all when she rages like a child and curses like a sailor. I've always said, people who curse are people too stupid to bring their point across. there are many powerful words, but curses words are a indicator of third class.
| asd chapter 19 . 9/5
darth voldemort... that ruined the story for me
| asd chapter 18 . 9/5
I wish that vitiate would've really died at that tomb. This nth coming of him isn't a good plotline. Voldemort would've been enough and after that sidious and vader. You have too many villains
| asd chapter 12 . 9/5
what a stupid decision to expose ahsoka so. This truly has me wondering should I keep reading.
| ALPHA02FURY97 chapter 27 . 8/17
Hey it has been five years you promised us the third installment of IATB when will you release it, while Star wars is going on a nut shell due to the constant lazy writings of Disney and clone wars ended with a satisfactory even if it was continued by Disney after Lucasfilm was sold around 2010 I'm still waiting for your third installment this is a very good fic and I hope you promised the harem of Harry with Six gix and one of them is Ashoka on which reminds me of her own show.
| Tarouza chapter 27 . 8/16
Just reread through both books for the first time in a while. I keep hoping the 3rd book starts showing up but I hope all is going well with your family
| Phazer12 chapter 4 . 8/13
I think I am dropping this...THis is garbage on many levels...I cant believe I read past 23 chapters, 280k words for this...It came very late for me, that the ending it was gearing towards is not one we would want.
Force users shown as too powerful despite the eplthora of attacks and uses magic users have. On an average an auror would defeat a jedi/Sith member unless the two sides were thrown in at hands distance. I get that lightsabers are highly effective against blasters "blast". But really magic spells are more than just energy blasts? They are changers modifiers, you cant just light saber away a reduction..and magic is not about throwing spell balls, its so much more.
Second thing is Harry Potter is not THE main character, he is not even A main character or even a side character. Every character here is byproduct or a pawn or useful piece of NOX. THe start of the fic gave them some personalities,,, now its not. Despite going through many hints and all..I can predict (and I just saw a glimpse of the last chapters) Harry is just Nox lapdog, just someone she can point at and harry will drool and attack it. I don't care that Nox is MC and not Harry but at least give them imp roles other than just being: Nox Harry! Do this, good boy, who wants a treat.
| Phazer12 chapter 3 . 8/13
Okay, I think it is a first minuscule step towards what I wanted. Like it has been something which was brewing like from the end of first book and now in the first three big chapters. Harry is by and far, just what Dumbledore wanted, just to Nox instead of him. Harry acts more like a pawn or a person entirely integrated to Nox, with all his actions being done to please her or fearing if it will disappoint her. ISnt that what exactly Dumbles wanted, a moldable pawn who he can manipulate? Isnt that what Harry is right now? I mean I thought a better trial would have been if Nox was in the trial herself going against Harry's morals and he had to take the tough decision of going along with his mother, whom he had followed to a letter for his 13 years old or stand his ground for himself...the choice between easy and right. That would have been a trial. That would have made him his own man. Harry as of now has no chance of becoming a leader except if he becomes a leader in front while Nox controls everything from the shadows. What fuckall, cuz I get the feeling that you are not killing Nox, and if she is not out, Harry is not gonna grow.
| Akito Shaoku Mizukouken chapter 27 . 7/15
I'm good to assume the series is officially dead now?
| Guest chapter 27 . 7/14
Disappointing and over all generally terrible
| Snarglbarg chapter 27 . 6/28
Man, I hope you come back to thos someday. I would love to see how this plays out.