| Reviews for The Last Straw |
|---|
  Guest chapter 117 . 9/4 excellent story. |
 MargaritaS chapter 117 . 9/2 Great story, I am so glad you finished it, I just re-read it from the beginning I loved so many things. Some of my favorites include, the army of construction house elves flipping properties and overwarding buildings to protect the schools, I loved the Salem school system and I loved Tim and Harry's relationship. Also I can't remember NCIS well enough to know if all of the cases you had were based off of existing episodes but I loved them, they were excellently thought out :) |
| Stacy Damato3 chapter 117 . 8/14 Please make a sequel |
| viningc chapter 117 . 7/30 Thank you for sharing this story. I was not to enamored with all the sex scenes, but found the rest of the story of a good enough quality and interest to be able to keep going. |
| kydarkangel2007 chapter 117 . 7/28 I loved this story from the start and i was so glad the way it ended |
| Melikalilly chapter 117 . 7/16 I love this story |
| A chapter 32 . 6/20 Um, speed limit on the highway would be 65, the local speed limits vary from 20 near a school, 25 close residential, 35 lower density. In a bar the bartender can be charged, and the business can be cited, if someone is served to the point of alcohol poisoning. |
| SunPho3n1x chapter 117 . 6/12 This is such an amazing story! I love it every time I read it. I love how it contains elements of both series and that Harry finally gets the family he always wanted. It’s great to see Tim get support too. Thank you for writing this. |
| gis chapter 117 . 5/29 thank you so much, I do love this story . |
| summer164 chapter 20 . 5/2 I gets a shock but Tim just stormed off. I feel for Harry |
| summer164 chapter 1 . 5/1 really good |
| bella Damon and klaus chapter 113 . 4/29 i thought the other son was named archer not hunter |
| summer164 chapter 5 . 4/29 Cool that Harry will be working with MI5 |
| magnoliarossa chapter 72 . 4/27 I've probably already said it, but I'm not sure and it was definitely a more generic comment, but if Teddy is 5 years old here and was born when Harry is almost 18, then at most Harry is 23 years old. Not many chapters ago you said that Pansy was 28, and Harry was 27, assuming she was older she would have been 22 or 23 - I don't remember how long ago that was but the figure is. In any case, except for the question of the years which make little sense even given a time turner, I love this story because it is not the first time I have reread it. Thanks for sharing it |
| ladytsuki11 chapter 1 . 4/6 is this fic on ao3? ive been wanting to rerea it but i cant seem to find it on ao3 and i dont normally read on ffn anymore |