|Reviews for The Last Straw|
| MargaritaS chapter 63 . 9/23
i just adore this story, i reread it from the beginning and just couldnt stop, its way past a reasonable bed time and i still want more :)
| ruth hammond chapter 30 . 9/22
this is long after you made the request as to what we would prefer in chap. 30, but there is one other choice. The choice is up to you...I would prefer that you not wear yourself out and do what you writing says fits you best, there are times for shorter chapters and times for longer chapters. This is up to you, but maybe not including the names at the end of the chapters would save you some time, its nice to see your name "up in lights" so to speak and you may have some fans spoiled...next time maybe not getting yourself into this spot...! Anyway, I am enjoying the story and thank you for your efforts!
Back to the next chapter...
| ruth hammond chapter 20 . 9/21
Just read the description of poor little Teddy after the international portkey and thought that a little kid/metamorphmagus would not be able to hide if he were really sick with maybe a worning if he was going to sick up...
| ruth hammond chapter 7 . 9/18
Besides enjoying your story, I find the names of your readers/fans to be delightful. I have run into several of them when reading other authors writings...They must have good taste...hehehe!
Thanks for giving me another author's works to read...
| ruth hammond chapter 6 . 9/18
I'm going to have to check out the rest of your writings, this one is good...
| ruth hammond chapter 3 . 9/17
I found this story listed in Duochanfan"s favorite stories and I' glad that I did. After all, if you like someones writing, then you probably will like the writing of someone that they like...on to the next chapter...
| Sarasri chapter 63 . 9/15
This story is so amazing! You have the characters down so well.
| Marikili68 chapter 63 . 9/14
I really love your story! Please update soon!
| Rainbow2007 chapter 62 . 9/6
oh love this story
| blinddivinity chapter 63 . 9/2
Love, love, love this fic! Best crossover I have ever read.
| lescavanagh chapter 63 . 9/1
I have enjoyed all that I have read so far. Thank you for opening my eyes to Tim and Harry slash
| Merlenyn chapter 63 . 8/30
Oh Tony... XD Of course he would be put out that there'd be a lack of single females at a one-year old child's birthday party... XD Hopefully he doesn't get himself into too much trouble chatting up the ladies there. heh
Also yay for party! And yay for mingling! And double yay for Ron and Hermione doing better with life even if Ron's all pushed out of shape still that he was forced into it by Hadrian. XD
Nice to see that he managed to catch another Death Eater... even if it came at the price of another person dying for recognizing him. :( At least Hadrian managed to prove that the man was a Death Eater and that he had murdered the tourist who spotted him, as well as having killed a couple others in the years since he'd settled there.
Wondering when we'll see Abby again and what'll happen with that... and also if anyone else from the Wizarding world will cause trouble for Hadrian and family (like Draco or others... still wondering who the mysterious Healer was that cast that spell on him and where they are...), or if Ginny will eventually figure out where Hadrian is living and try to go after him herself and convince him that she still loves him and he should still love her and that she'd be MUCH better for him than some "muggle/squib" man... I just hope she wouldn't try and hurt Teddy or Rosie in her attempt to get him to go back to her. Or Tim.
| Beth5572 chapter 63 . 8/30
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your great work of art.
Thank you and Please,
| DullReign82 chapter 63 . 8/30
Another wonderful chapter!
| Guest chapter 58 . 8/28
Do your research. Depending on the country anywhere from 1/5th to 1/3 of muslims believe heretics should be 's not even counting the fact most people in Islamic Theologies believe that.
Do you want to know what the real Religion of Peace is? It's the Amish.
You don't see them blowing shit up, or driving into crowds, or shooting people just because they believe in a different religion and have a different dress code.