Reviews for Pass the Syrup, Please
HeyMichelle360 chapter 21 . 4/24
That was the sweetest epilogue! I really loved the whole story. It was spectacular.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 20 . 4/24
You write sex scenes really well! What a chapter! Aaaand nice laugh at the end asking for her number lol.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 18 . 4/24
I thought it was perfect. Mamoru flustered and not able to express himself well. Usagi just in shock and making a scene. But Motoki won it all! That was hilarious!
HeyMichelle360 chapter 16 . 4/24
This reminded me of Clueless. Cher with her “oh my gosh, I like Josh!”
HeyMichelle360 chapter 15 . 4/24
My heart is so heavy now, I want to cry for them. You should be very proud of this chapter, of this piece of work in general! It’s great.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 14 . 4/23
Oh no! How o cover up jealousy when you don’t want the love of your life to realize it? You don’t. You let yourself fall madly in love. Usagi and Mamoru can be infuriatingly dense! The carnival setting is a lot of fun!
HeyMichelle360 chapter 10 . 4/21
Poor Mamoru. Something always interrupts right when things are about to turn.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 8 . 4/20
The chapter was a great build up! The teasing, the flirting, gah!
HeyMichelle360 chapter 3 . 4/19
Minako is my favorite. And what a perfect way for Usagi to get defensive of Mamoru.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 2 . 4/19
I like this Mamoru. Flirtatious, a jerk, but then realizing he was being a jerk and how to make it up to her.
HeyMichelle360 chapter 1 . 4/19
What a great set up. I’m smiling and already squealing about what will happen in this story.
maraudergurl2010 chapter 21 . 1/22
Brilliant and sweet. This was SUCH a trip. Thanks mate!
maraudergurl2010 chapter 19 . 1/22
"Usa, I have my hotel room for another 0 " he paused to glance down at his watch "-four hours." and "Eat your food, Usako." are probably the greatest effing lines of dialogue I've ever read in my life. God BLESS YOU CHILD. :P
maraudergurl2010 chapter 18 . 1/22
GOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLDEN. And enough to know what was going on from both perspectives; your narrative decision was excellent. I loved the angst in this so so so so so very much. :D
maraudergurl2010 chapter 17 . 1/22
I love Mamoru's masochistic tendencies. It's just the best thing to read ever. :P
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