|Reviews for A Million Miles from Nowhere|
| holiday chapter 1 . 2/10/2008
you have got to write more or else i will personally hunt you down
| Thakan'dar chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Just wanted to let you know people are reading your story. Great start but you need to update!
| Score chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Good start! Though I agree with the suggestion about Helaine. What happened to finishing the story?
| Luna chapter 1 . 2/9/2003
Helaine needs to sound more like someone from Ordin as opposed to someone from Earth. She used too much slang. Plus, she would never willingly hand over her sword. She might sheath it, or let someone examine it if they asked, but would never willingly take orders.
Other than that, the story seems to be going fine. Please continue, and remember to be true to the characters. _
| Meitora chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
Very nice, strong on dialogue, a little weak on description, but overall rather interesting. I'm so thrilled that the section is growing...write more soon(ish). Aroo!