Reviews for Finding An Alpha |
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![]() ![]() great fic! I dont like canon kiba much since he's just a lame, all bark no bite, dog version of naruto without the qualities that make naruto so amazing as a person/character. But I love the kiba u wrote here. I fucking love tsunderes ToT |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you wrote this. Love is awkward and you captured it perfectly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story was beautiful thank you for writing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() theres a copy thing cause it lagged and i dont know how to delete it lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() female kiba was so unique and well written the personalities and sluce of life so good i wish there was more to read and im happy i read it all it was just so good but now im letting some tears flow becsuse theres no more to read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() just amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing, great about getting an actual life story and their personalities. |
![]() ![]() ![]() binn |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok I have to say the previous comment has it all wrong. Female Kiba is such a unique idea I literally had to read it, and it doesn't disappoint. I for one think the character interactions are adorable between the pair, and the side characters feel in character while still not being bland. Drunk Hinata is my favorite concept I had never thought of before. The missions and mystery sub plot feel believable while still vague enough that it doesn't distract from the main plot. I usually feel disenchanted when stories get too creative, which I assume is what the guy below meant, but honestly sticking it out is rewarding. The interactions are unique, we see characters who don't do much together in the show hang out, and by the end it's phenomenal and comes together so well you'd think you were a professional writer. I feel weird leaving a long review on an old story but man this thing is up there with some of my favorites from the concept alone, the fact you're such an excellent writer is just icing. I checked out few other fics and I like your style. I just wish there was more Fem Kiba stuff out there now. This story is an absolute gem, and I have to thank you for the chance I got to read it. |
![]() ![]() Starts out ok but I lost interest the further we went on, perhaps due to being one of the authors early works? Either way while the tsundere relationship is cute, I feel the dialogue is lacking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're so good at writing fluffy stories that it makes me sad that you stopped for the most part or grew bitter with series like Naruto and abandoned fics or wrote endings to them that just crapped on the premise. This one had a near perfect ending and I'm glad you wrote it wish all of your docs got the same treatment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kiba should have kicked Naruto in the balls for that promise |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, canon Naruto is probably the dumbest MC in anime history anyways so I can’t blame him for misinterpreting Kiba’s intentions. |
![]() ![]() I wish you did not jump a head to much this fanfic is so good wish you made it a lot longer then this this one is one of best i have found like seen how she acted in classroom it would have been better if you started it and then could have showed use how they acted when they first seen each other after they seen each other since three years of training I was looking forward to get parts of him training hard so her could keep her save not just being back sasuke so he could keep one he was in love with save from help that where his enemy like come on where he could have gotten stronger then what he did now that would have made it even batter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice and Wholesome, kiba really supported him all the way through since the beginning with sasuke and his dream of being hokage. Also we needed someone to tell sakura off and that manifested masterfully in kiba. I realized hinata was a great wife and as a person but kiba was better since she was there when he needed it most like after he lost sasule. |