Reviews for The Fallen Free
blossomknight chapter 12 . 5/25
please I need another chapter!
MagicInUsAll chapter 12 . 1/8
Binge read this whole story this morning! And I am absolutely loving it! The case is compelling as is how you’re developing Mai’s relationship with Naru. I can’t wait to read more so please update soon!

madisnk chapter 12 . 1/4
wonderful and very intriguing! ! naru and mai are very in charactergreat story!
random chapter 12 . 1/2
Need... Update... Gonna die... Without... It...
Chelsealovesreading101 chapter 12 . 10/2/2017
plz update soon I love ur story.. hope there is more natural and mai parts tho
CY chapter 12 . 9/15/2017
I really appreciated to read your story until now! I will wait impatiently to read the following chapters! Thanks
Guest chapter 12 . 9/12/2017
Great work. I love this so far. Glad to see Naru finally leaning affection towards Mai. Can't wait to find out what happens next.
MemoreM chapter 1 . 9/12/2017
Ghost loves japan 77 chapter 12 . 9/12/2017
Wow can't believe my dad instinct was right lol
And glad naru is ok but poor Mai can't catch a break. Great chapter can't wait to read more.
Ghost loves japan 77 chapter 11 . 9/12/2017
Oh no naru has got to stop doing that,
And I find the other males in that family suspicious ... great chapter can't wait to read more.
SSTrans chapter 12 . 9/11/2017
Thank you for the update. Did the dad kill his son's future wife and then made his son help hide the body. Oh maybe Paul did it and his dad help hide the evidence. There is quite a few possibilities. Keep up the work.
SSTrans chapter 11 . 9/11/2017
Thanks for the update. I hope they get Naru help as soon as possible and Mai watching all of it unfold. Keep up the great work you are doing.
Kallen21 chapter 12 . 9/11/2017
I Can't wait for the next chapter
Kallen21 chapter 11 . 9/11/2017
Can't wait for the next chapter
MistressSleepwell666 chapter 11 . 9/11/2017
Yay! Thank you for updating! I recently went back to this fic in hopes that it would be updated. I like the details you add it really helps me paint a picture of the surroundings. Btw 27 is not old.
I was kinda hoping Mai would use his PK like gene. You left me with a cliffy, I was upset till I read your note about updating.
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