Reviews for Too Much Stress
Austin Carlile chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
I am sick of this place of death
With a pace that’s set
And you know the pessimistic bend
Just to watch you break
Practice what you preach
Separate skin from the bone
Digging at my flesh
Like a schizophrenic with a blade
Fingers tracing scars
Mapping out reminders of just how much I can take

Pressure in my brain
My shoulders take the weight
Back’s about to break

Pain
Every day that I awake
In my blood and through my veins
Now there’s nothing left that you can take away from me
Pain

Because I’ve seen it before
I’ve lived it before
I’ve been there before
Incarnate
So don’t you ever underestimate me
Daily death
Crooning in my ear
Things I wanna hear
Turn my head and bite my tongue
Spitting blood on my pre-determined grave
This is all a game

Pressure in my brain
My shoulders take the weight
Back’s about to break
This is all a game

Pain
Every day that I awake
In my blood and through my veins
Now there’s nothing left that you can take away from me
Pain
Every day that I awake
In my blood and through my veins
Nothing left that you can take away from me ("Pain" 2016)
Pimpin McThug chapter 1 . 6/17/2017
welp ters gos mi happenes i hav ben lesenin tu celse grin nd attila i migt cri lik WHAWHAWHAWHAWHWHAWHAWHAWHA if u ned mi i wil slit mi rists nd lesen tu mcr azkin alezendrea brin mi tha horzen nd twenti one polots rap moosic fo lyfe nowif u ned mi i wil cri;(;(;(;(;(
Redred-DoReMi chapter 1 . 12/11/2016
For a Chibi-Robo story about self-harm, I was pleasantly surprised. The plot, characters, and writing style were all ridiculously simple, but it's a positive, charming simple that I can't help but smile at. Even Telly's dialogue felt like real, restricted-by-its-E-rating dialogue that I'd see from the series if it had to deal with this issue, and not to mention, he was completely in-character handling it - asking all the questions and saying the same things a person who dearly cares after the person they're speaking to.

This is a rather old fic, but thanks for writing it. It was a cute read!