Reviews for Malfoy Manor
Mariella chapter 5 . 4/10
Hi. This. Was. BRILLIANT. I've never read such realistic beautiful 'tell the parents' Scorrose fic. Draco isn't a major d!ck but he isn't a cuddly puppy either, Ron isn't an immature crybaby, and Hermione isn't passive. Oh, and Astoria actually exists and has opinions! I think everyone's reactions and actions made so much sense and your plot flowed so well. I was hanging onto every word. Loved Harry's cameos, as well as seeing glimpses of Hugo and James/Al/Lily. Amazing story!
mcepl chapter 1 . 12/20/2018
Never ever apologize for ignoring Cursed Child!
Iris Stardust chapter 5 . 11/6/2017
At first I wasn't sure what to think of this because I often get annoyed by Ron reacting immaturely to Rose dating Scorpius in fanfiction but I soon realised that this wasn't the case in this story. Adults' reactions really made sense ane it's possible to understand why they don't feel comfortable with situation. It's not only rivalry they had at school but much more. It was very nice to see how they tried to get past that for their children.
JJayGurl chapter 5 . 8/30/2017
A lovely and heartfelt story.
link55-06 chapter 5 . 5/1/2017
I love how you write the characters. The story is also believable without it being too sappy. Thanks for sharing the story.
nyctofiliac chapter 5 . 4/13/2017
This is so beautiful. I despise that I'm craving more but that there is none left. Thank you so much for writing this!
UinenDolothen chapter 5 . 1/12/2017
I enjoyed this very much!
Jenna98 chapter 5 . 1/12/2017
I love this pairing! I wish there was more!
Toraach chapter 5 . 1/5/2017
Hermione and Ron are even more crybabies that I've ever thought...

I wonder if some one really count how many times Draco was hurt by the golden idiots in the books, that would be far more times than in an oposite direction. I remember only things which Draco has ever done: stupid buttons in 4rd year, some name calling, action with Harry in the train in 6th year and maybe some with an inquisition squad, but that was more silly school yard rivalry when the golden idiots beat him, hexed him, many times.
Toraach chapter 4 . 1/5/2017
A original thing in your story. You are the first one who include an accident with Ron and poison into a plot. Probably because only some people care for Ron, and for the rest he is a third wheel.

Triggered by a word "manor" :D :D :D :D
Toraach chapter 3 . 1/5/2017
Draco Malfoy didn't poisoned moron Weasley. The red head frist ate not his chocolates, and later as a glutton he is drank a bottle of not his wine.

I cannot understand how Hermione/Ron is even possible, that idiot even cannot cast a howler spell...
Toraach chapter 2 . 1/5/2017

That's nothing personal, I just want to write some my thoughts about this plot device you write in your story.

I have seen a similar things in many after school dramiones and next generation stories, that Hermione or Rose don't like Malfoy Manor, are so afraid to go there and such. I just don't buy it. In Hogwarts Hermione faced even more, and she still goes there and her kids, George sends his kids to Hogwarts despite that his twin brother died there. I think that Hermione or Rose just overreacted. Also one sided mentality, if I'm correct the glorious golden trio were also gits, but noone is ever allowed to have a grudge against them, when they can judge anyone for things which happened many years ago. I remember that Harry was the one who nearly killed Draco in HBP, and I have not seen any story that Draco hold a grudge against him...

I wonder about that strange lack of information among kids. In Hogwarts certainly all kids should know who was on which side in the war and using it in bullying.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
I like it...hope you'll cotinue!
MandyinKC chapter 5 . 10/30/2016
And so they found common ground...

Favorites: Hugo again, I liked how he confronted Rose, then the horsing around, Ron and Draco's duel, Hermione's question, Ron conceding, and Astoria's answer. I do wish you would have shown us more of Rose and Scorpius relationship, but I liked the emphasis on family, and also that Draco was going bald.
MandyinKC chapter 4 . 10/30/2016
I loved the cousins hanging out. James referring to Malfoy as Ron's arch-nemesis and Harry's "I'm very disappointed in you" speech. Al proclaiming that it's all Ron's fault. My favorite, favorite moment was Ginny and Hermione. I loved Ginny reassuring Hermione that she didn't always have to have it all together. And the twist in the end. I wasn't expecting Astoria to be the one to step in it!
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