Reviews for Team Eleven |
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![]() ![]() Hmm. Well I actually thought of making a self insert of myself on Yakumos team. |
![]() ![]() Okay, Rin and Naruto? That is just wrong. Hs like half her age. |
![]() ![]() Did anyone start finishing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would like to adopt this fanfiction because I have a few ideas on how to progress the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will take your team eleven story I've got some idea's on how to progress the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anyone take this idea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You could have team 7 get wave and have rins team arrive as backup and this is just me have haku survive thanks to rin saving him from kakashis raikiri and have him join her team for chunin exams |
![]() ![]() ![]() You don't get flamed so why do you care, may I ask? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story seems interesting so far keep going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why are you rewriting it?! This is fucking great! I love this story man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good Chapter, Looking Forward To The Mission :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, Naruto Has His Eyes Opened xD Great Chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice Start, I'm Definitely Looking Forward To Reading More. I Hope The Pairing Is Naruto x Rin x Yakumo Since Both Are Pretty Rare :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So good with what you have...but why you stop? It's good and you left it on a rather sad note with out writing anything else...make Rin not sad...I command it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hang sugoi |