Reviews for The Pit
DevinBourdain chapter 2 . 2/5/2017
Looking forward to finding out what happens next
mtcbones chapter 2 . 8/22/2016
oooh what now? you're doing very well so now on to the next installment.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/18/2016
This is amazing! You write their dialogue and interactions so well I can just about see it! This one's a real winner, let me tell you. I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment.
Aramat57 chapter 1 . 8/14/2016
Nice collection of parachutes. LOL! Love that line!
Inna chapter 2 . 8/13/2016
Yeah, that must be a strain all right.
Thank you for a quick update!
Scottea chapter 2 . 8/13/2016
Another great chapter with a great feel of the relationship between them. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
More please!
Kimberleah chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
Interesting story. It has possibilities!
Inna chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
Wow, that's intriguing! I'll look forward to the updates.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
THIS WILL BE ENJOYABLE TO READ I THINK. I WILL BE LOOKING FOR THE UPDATES. THANK YOU FOR SHARING.
twelvedimensional chapter 1 . 8/12/2016
"at least we have a good collection of parachutes" you nailed bones's snark perfectly! this first chapter is really intriguing, and I look forward to more
Scottea chapter 1 . 8/11/2016
Very interesting start. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing.