Reviews for For a Chance at Happiness |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is one of the most interesting fanfictions of Naruto. There are a lot of turns that I wasn't expecting and yet the writing keeps being consistent no matter how much time passes. And it's amazing since it was published in 2016. I binge read it and there were so many parts where I screamed "Junko!" Since she is such a tragic yet resilient character. Sure since the later chapters, it got annoying that no one could tell anything but as an adult I could see how some things should be kept away from a child though she is a soldier. There IS a practice to keep away info from soldiers to make them more easier to command but the recent realisation that her mother had Danzo's seal made it more surprising. These revelations are what I like the most in this story. Although it's been 2 years since the update I hope it will continue and I will be waiting for that day. Thank you so much for the time well spent and hope you are keeping good! |
![]() ![]() She's so touch starved my goodness, someone needs to just pick her up and carry her around. physical touch is really important at this age. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i really enjoyed the story, thanks for writing it to this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am amazed after reading this story and my favorite part is this, Once Ikeda sensei let them choose their seats, Junko moved first, taking an empty seat at the very back of the room. Shisui was surprised; that had been the exact seat he was planning to get. He made due with the seat in front of her, thinking it would be awkward to sit next to her as they didn't know each other. Considering their clan differences, it was probably for the best. When the class was dismissed for lunch, Shisui joined the two from his clan, Yasu and Katsuo, who he had played with a few times in the past since he didn't know anyone else. He spared a brief glance at the Hyūga behind him, who was grimacing to herself as she stared off into space. It was the kind of expression he saw on the clan head's face when Itachi-chama had an accident and his aunt was out in the market. It was a face of muted dread and resignation, but he couldn't dwell on it too long when his clansmen ushered him away to the schoolyard. Most of his nervousness dwindled as he took comfort in the familiarity of his distant relatives. He would have to get used to the looks and whispers from his much older classmates, though he hadn't expected another young prodigy to be seated within the same class and the same year. While it had come as a surprise, it also came as a comfort. He knew that both Katsuo and Yasu felt odd at the prospect that the young child they had watched over just a year ago was going to be graduating alongside them. He expected this apparent camaraderie between them all would fade as they competed to get the top rank of the class. So it was nice to see another young face, even if it meant that she was would also experience the war; at least he wouldn't be going through it by himself. When they returned from lunch, it was only the whispering of his new classmates that Shisui learned what had happened in the hallway of their classroom. Apparently, the little Hyūga had gotten into a confrontation with her other relatives, though the most interesting tidbit was that Junko Hyūga was the heiress of her clan. His eyes along with the others drifted to the little heiress already in her seat as the room filled, her brows furrowed in concentration as she wrote something down. Junko Hyūga was strange, there was no doubt about that. However, she walked with confidence despite her youth, talking back to Ikeda-sensei and assisting the civilians that first day in class. And the way she had fought him in their spar the following day had intrigued him so much that Shisui couldn't get her out of his head for days after. Shisui hadn't thought it would be hard to speak to the little Hyūga considering they were close in age, but trying to speak privately with her was proving to be difficult. Most of the time, she was surrounded by the two civilians Noburu and Akane. From his observations, the other boy didn't like Uchiha all that much, though he was sure it was because of his cousin's brash behavior towards the boy. He didn't want to make things awkward for any of them so he tried to find her on her own to ask her the questions that plagued his thoughts. Like, why did she decide to join the academy at such a young age? Did she see the world the same way he did? Did she want to change it? It was too bad that the first time he got the chance, he almost gave her a concussion with his boomerang. He had planned to throw it around a little, maybe get her attention and use it as a conversation starter- since he had just gotten it and it was really cool but he had thrown it too far, too fast, and it had slipped from his grasp before he could correct himself. But Junko moved with a quickness that surprised him and just as he called her name, she disappeared over the edge of the bridge she had been sitting on, the boomerang passing harmlessly overhead. He rushed to the edge only to scramble away as the girl flipped back onto red railing, veins pulsing at the corners of her narrowed eyes. And I really love these four characters (Chakra),(Ryuzetsu),(Junko)&(Noburu) and there role in story is amazing and I am wondering to draw these four for you and if you are interested so here's my,,, Discord: estrella_juana Instagram: est_rellajuana Gmail: |
![]() ![]() And this chapter is the swing point of not going to read anymore even if updated. It was getting close before. Jaraiya and Minato are in the room and she says nothing about her suspicions of being set-up and/or her mother's (who is a Senju) probable seal? Nothing? ? ? Drama and struggle sessions just for the sake of having them...from an isekai'd adult...nope, done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You misspelled "scared" at the beginning of the chapter. You spelled it as "sacred"... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well its been more than 2 years, are you planning to continue? It was going well so far. I was waiting to see how she deals with the Uchica . |
![]() ![]() Please update this is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I need moreeeeee but u haven't updated since 2022 |
![]() ![]() ![]() one of the funniest things i found about this situation is that Orchimaru was genuinsanly trying to stabilize or at least find out the source of Junko's problem and try to ease it out and make sure she lives. i do like it when people write Orchimaru as this monster whille mysterious and dangeorus still comes across as this logical person knowing when and when not too push his luck |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Hope you will continue your story specially cause you left on a cliffhanger if not at least can you give the bullet point |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really really good story! Don't know if you'll ever continue but so far its been super enjoyable 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() wheres next time author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Danzo got his fingers in every pie he absolutely shouldn't have them in |