Reviews for Trolling the Toad |
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![]() ![]() Can u have him turn up with cat ears and a tail? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fum story :D |
![]() ![]() I mean danger detector. |
![]() ![]() I like how she has harry-does-something-agnist-her detector. |
![]() ![]() Not a fan of the shorter chapters, but like the story otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This doesn’t feel very way accurate to Umbridge. She would at the very least be taking points from Harry. All this does is make her do nothing to Harry while Harry does things that she could very easily stop if you had let her. I love seeing umbridge get comeuppance, but there’s no satisfaction if you make her totally impotent to merely take away points, or take away Harry’s stuff while in detention. |
![]() ![]() this deserves an epilogue or something and not leave it like that, still a very good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Toad hairstyle? It would have improved her look...minutely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun fic! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ding Dong the Umbitch is gone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Slip sliding awaaaaay! Are you sure you can't make her route all the way out of the castle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() McGonagall walked away with a spring in her step? Boy she seems ...happy and that makes me suspcious. Either she's amused the kids are getting away with the pranks or... I just remembered a scene in the books when McG walked past Peeves trying to unscrew the lightbulbs, she mumbles that it unscrews in the other direction. I have to wonder if the teachers are also getting in their own pranks against Umbridge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why yes, Hermione it is different. Here Umbridge already said that time was up. Therefore, detention was over. Hermione, on the other hand, walked out of a class during class time. So technically Hermione is right they are different... just not how she wanted to present it: Harry was in the wrong for walking out on a teacher... even though what she did could boil down to the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ROFLMTFO! Pepto Umbitch! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quite humorous to read, and I really wish it had happened in canon… |