Will you update any time soon? Did Gary and Misty have a thing despite what they have said? I think you should include a strong egoshipping that took place in the past. Excellent story. Grettings from Argentina.

I hope you find your way back to this story someday. It deserves to be finished.

More chapters please I need an update oh my god what a cliffhanger I need more chapters please please what is going on insides of Misty’s head I thought she would be thrilled that she and ash are together or is that what she is afraid of that they haven’t comfirmed what they are is she afraid that ash will leave her again will misty and ash have their happy ending

Love it!

At least now all is in the open, its not going to be easy especially with misty in the equation but the first step is already taken

Yay, they made up and finally kissed!
I think I know what might be wrong with Misty.

Adorable! Just adorable! Obviously he knows. I don't think he is that oblivious. Update soon! :)

That flashback made me think again that something happen to gary he is not a guy to respond with violence like that.

What the hell happen to gary?!

I know they would have arguments but not like this I really want misty and ash to stay together and stay loyal to each other and never leave each others side and they make up for what happened and also realize what's really going on

So Ash knows she likes him! I'm a bit surprised XD
Gary was nice in the flashback, but he's a complete jerk in the present lol I wonder if he really likes Misty or he's just trying to make Ash mad.
DAMN, a cliffhanger! I hate cliffhangers D:

I hate you. For the first time I was actually shipping Gary and Misty. -_- Though I still ship Misty and Ash and that will forever remain that way.

Hm... I wonder what she is going to say. Update soon! :)

I love how big bro Brock was immediately in action.
And I guess that's goodbye training for Ash lol

You freaked me out. Oh I am so glad she is ok. This was definitely a turn. Update soon! :)

I say ash manages to rescue misty in time before gary causes any more harm to misty then he already has its time for ash to be mistys knight in shining armor and swipe her off her feet even if ash gets a little mad when he finds out about her secret i know he will forgive her he's not the type to stay made for long and he's more of the forgiving type and the type not to hate someone and I really hope ash and misty do end up together soon there true lovers in my opinion