Reviews for The Captive and the Coward
Michelle Law chapter 15 . 9/21
Yay Bella! I wish she could have cut his balls off and shoved them in his mouth! At least Felix died slowly, in great pain, felled by the one he'd brutally abused. The king is dead.
karen4honor chapter 5 . 5/21
I love how you've got the story going!
ImYours1901 chapter 19 . 5/10
I’ve definitely already read the story but it was just so good I had to read it again. I loved everything about this, I think the premise that you got from Game of Thrones was such a good thing to build on. Just amazing
Burning4Peeta chapter 20 . 5/5
This was a really good story. I love that you had hints of GOT in this.
BurtonM1927 chapter 20 . 4/12
Delightful, I love 5o add your story to my favorite historical novels.
Thank you
Chaiteaa chapter 15 . 1/20
YESSSSS! I have never cheered so loud. It’s about TIME she got herself some justice! I’m so happy!
Chaiteaa chapter 2 . 1/20
I hate Felix. With a burning passion.

I LOVE this story though. I’m only two chapters in and I’m already excited to see how this plays out. The characterization is great, the storyline is exciting, and your style flows so well. You’re a wonderful writer.
HollywoodTwore chapter 20 . 1/16
At first I could see a lot of GoT similarities, but I'm glad this continued on its own path. Well written and interesting, it was a good read. Thanks for sharing.
Camila chapter 20 . 1/10
Hello Kristina, thank you so much for allow the translation of this amazing story, you're a great author and I hope to read more of your stories in Spanish. Greetings from Peru Congrats for your baby by the way :)
paleticss92 chapter 10 . 11/20/2019
So, first things first. You are a great writer, but also an incredible irresponsible one who lacks care for their readers.
Any writer, in any stories, when pulling sexual abuse scene writes a warning to their writers. That way the person reading it can wrap their minds about what's to come and prepare. I was abused as a teen, this was awful to read. And this lack of empathy on your part is leaving me bumfounded. This is not a recent story, and many people have left similar reviews as mine here. So you have had the opportunity to make amends. The fact you didn't is very telling. Again I am left feeling a bit "abandoned" as a reader.
I very much hope and wish for you to be more mature as a writer and show a careful and caring predisposition to your audience regarding this themes.
This is a hard pass for me. I am leaving the story here.
JojoJinx chapter 20 . 11/2/2019
I'm working through all your stories. I read one of them and really respected the quality of your writing. I was delighted when i clicked on your username to see you have Written so many. I'm only on the first page of the list of your stories and this story was the one that least interested me when i read the mini description... But I've absolutely loved it️ good work. Now can't wait to scroll through the next page list of your stories and pick another to absorb myself in.
Thankyou for sharing your talent with us
Loveforgreeneyes chapter 18 . 10/4/2019
I read this story once before and have enjoyed it the second time as well. Great read.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2019
Hi, I think you are a good writer, but something has bothered me in your stories. It is irresponsible to write about sexual abuse situou a trigger warning. To force these events randomly in stories without a warning is hurtful to readers who are sensitive to that kind of subject. I honestly hope that you are more careful when approaching these themes in the future.
Guest chapter 20 . 7/19/2019
I liked it enough (:
Guest chapter 13 . 7/18/2019
Yay let’s rejoice she’s not pregnant even though her rape was Gratuitous
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