|Reviews for Battleground|
| TheLadyW chapter 1 . 7/21/2011
A powerful little story. Thank you for sharing it.
| MrsMosley chapter 1 . 5/25/2008
This is powerful and wonderful. Love it.
| Rose88 chapter 1 . 2/29/2008
Aww :) So sweet and believable, I love the Mal/Kaylee interaction.
| Falcon Horus chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
WOW! Fabulous! Really nice and very well written. Brought tears to my eyes there, that don't happen much.
| Katinka31 chapter 1 . 9/15/2005
Sweet Kaylee, I seen cowards. That ain't you. I swear to you.
Ah, that breaks my heart. You really capture Kaylee's sweetness, as well as her fears of letting down the crew. A very touching moment between her and Captain Mal.
| Sage1899 chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
More Kaylee and Mal PLEEZ!
I could read chapters n chapters about them.
| bushlaboo chapter 1 . 2/18/2003
Wow this was great! When do we get more? I so want more. I love the idea of Mal/Kaylee. Please, please, please write more soon!
| Tzegha chapter 1 . 2/10/2003
"I told her once that I was a mean old man. She laughed at me, thought I was joking. I wasn't. I put her in danger every day she flies with me. I know I'm tempting God. Yeah, you bastard. She's our next battleground. I understand. How many times has she come close to falling? But I'm always there to catch her. I'll always be there. You can't have her. Not her. You abandoned them all. Killed them all. Betrayed them. Betrayed me! But not this time. Not with her. With her, I win."
All I gotta say is, you gotta write a fic about that very last paragraph. Defiant Mal, fighting God over Kaylee. Write it. Now! Write, I say!
| KikiDiki chapter 1 . 2/2/2003
aww. that was so sweet. I love Kayle and the captian. they have such a sweet relationship. well written. sounded jus like the Mal.
| ThatGirlIsabel chapter 1 . 1/31/2003
Wow. You've captured them both perfectly, which I dig seeing as how they're my two favorites. I didn't much care for the lines, "I never should have brought her on board Serenity. If I were any kind of a righteous man I'd send her packing on the next transport back to her home. But I'm not a righteous man. Not anymore." But that's just 'cause I'm a sap and I like to see them all one big happy-if-slightly-dysfunctional family. I'm such a sucker for Mal/Kaylee interaction.