|Reviews for The Mess|
| Glacier-to-be chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
That was just halarious. Well done. toasty. shiny i mean.
| Elf Of Avalon chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
Elen: *laughs hysterically* amazing! You have the characters absolutely perfect!
And thanks for the emails, by the way.
| revivingophelia chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
Oh, this was great. I just love Wash, and this was a great depiction of him. He's a fantastic character. Great job.
| Drink Sparky Cola chapter 1 . 12/1/2003
Maystone, I reviewed one of your earlier stories a few days ago (Shelter) and in the review I kept mentioning this story, but it occurred to me that I'd never properly reviewed it. Well, I figured it deserved that and more, if I could give it, so here I am :)
Let me just start by reiterating that I did print this story up (it was one of the first of selected fanfics off this website that I decided to print up) and it's in a folder with other fanfiction I've deemed "worthy."
The reasons? Well, for starters, it's so damn funny, I laugh out loud every time I read it. Even when I was reading it to my friend and fellow Firefly watcher, I couldn't stop laughing my ass off I found it so hilarious.
This incessant need to dominate those around you. It isn't healthy.
Your words are full of weakness. When I rip out your throat, your words will die.
This is exactly what I was talking
Well you know how the Cap'n gets when I bring it up. So I thought that maybe, you know, what with Zoe being all banged up and all . . .
. . .that Mal would say, 'Kaylee, I believe what we need here is a kitten.'River (putting the flower behind her back)
It's for Zoe. I'll give it to her myself. (Pause) Kaylee wanted to get her a
Say what you will about Captain Reynolds, he's really quite maternal when it comes to his crew. By the way, please don't tell him I said that. I'm fairly certain that he'd shoot /Rex
Another of my kind! Large and with a very small brain.
Jayne (putting down his coffee)
Hunh. (Starts to make it walk across the table) Rar!
The Triceratops rattles slightly against the tabletop as Serenity lifts off.
| Tzegha chapter 1 . 2/3/2003
Great story! I laughed the whole way through, and the best part was it was all true to the 'verse we know and love!