Good writing skills, kinda boring

Loves it

Not bad. I do wish we could have seen more Obi-Wan/Ahsoka moments (like the fatherly kind of moments from Obi-Wan, or something.) Thanks for sharing this.

Awesome chapter! By the way, to moderate reviews, click on your username in the top right of the screen. Then click 'reviews." Then, click on 'moderate reviews.'

Awww... poor Ani

That last scene was sweet and beautiful which only makes Anakin becoming Vader all the more tragic

Short and sweet.

I look forward to that one shot!

I totally agree! We didn't get to see near enough of the characters more personal lives. I think that would make a great story, and I love to see it!

Your writings really improved, and it was great before! Keep up the good work. ;)

Please update

Awesome writing and story. You should definitely write an anisoka.

This looks really good, love this first chapter! Can't wait to read more, hopefully soon :)

Awesome story! Just curious, you said "oh gods" in your a/n, and I was wondering if maybe that was a Percy Jackson reference...?
Just curious. I love Percy Jackson. And if it's not, and you've never heard of the series, LOO IT UP! It's so good.

Poor Ahsoka. :(

Judging by your hints, I'm guessing Ahsoka's going to get worse, then there's going to be something to do with the fact that Daughter revived her on Mortis?

There were no clumps! Yay!

CLIFFHANGER?!

Another great chapter! I'm gonna be checking his thing every hour waiting for an update, you've got me hooked. ;)

God damn, this is exciting, hope all goes well. As always love the Anakin/Ahsoka interactions. Keep up the good work