|Reviews for Land Before Time: Secret of Saurus Rock Retold|
| Guest chapter 12 . 9/20
I’ve been waiting this chapter for months!
| Bookwriter94 chapter 12 . 9/19
So now the clock begins to tick, I bet the journey is going to get a whole lot worse from here on out. But I just hope Derek and the rest of the gang will catch up to them.
Well good luck on the next chapter!
| tanithlipsky chapter 12 . 9/19
| shoewax45 chapter 12 . 9/15
Great to see another chapter is here thanks for updating.
| Dino Guest chapter 12 . 9/15
Great to see this story update as always. Not too much to say about this chapter though that I didn't say last time. At least people are relatively okay and that Aylene and Littlefoot are due to be having the rest of their group (and possibly others) following them. As for what Aylene forgot, it's honesty been so long and I am sleepy right now so I'll just let this point be. :P Good luck and see you next time!
| Dino nerd chapter 12 . 9/14
Love how you published your 12th chapter on the 12th lol
| King of 2211 chapter 12 . 9/14
This may have taken long (and for good reason), but it's still just as epic!
Hope update soon :)
| Rock Raider chapter 12 . 9/13
So, another storm is forming, huh? I don't recall that from the movie. But I suppose you had to take some liberties with the story.
I noticed a few errors in the chapter.
Mistake:as he struggled to lift up onto the edge.
Should be: as he struggled to lift her up onto the edge.
Mistake:and the pathway beneath them cumbled.
Should be:and the pathway beneath them crumbled.
Mistake:How much time passed this one and the last one?
Should be:How much time has passed between this one and the last one?
Mistake:Aylene took on last deep breath and sat up.
Should be:Aylene to one last deep breath and sat up.
Something tells me that should be enough.
Anyway, update soon.
| GamerJay chapter 12 . 9/13
Welcome back. :) Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Girlbook chapter 12 . 9/13
Yay new chapter! Do more!
| AJ the Dragon Slayer chapter 12 . 9/12
when will you make more chapters
| ChimaTigon chapter 12 . 9/12
| KaijuEmperor chapter 12 . 9/12
What is this Sliver that's gnawing on Aylene's brain
| Z-King chapter 12 . 9/12
Nice to see this story still going. and I forgot are they heading towards Saurus rock or something else?
| Carlisle Fan 22 chapter 12 . 9/12
Oh geez I agree with her. These earthquakes are getting ridiculous. And just what is going on? I am sure we'll find out later.