I really like Anna's character, but I feel as though Eimindah's character needs some etiquette lessons!

yesssss Annalogia *pumps fist*

I think you've started laying some very interesting groundwork in this fic, with hinting at a 'prophecy' and possible plot events we could see in the future. Also, the children's interactions are enjoyable XD

I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this :)