Absolutely the best ending i'v read. seriously liked that story and want to thank you for it here, now, take care!. star of Ceratas incoming!

ok, loved that chapter!

*gets a cup of coffee..sits*

suspence,! love it!

I wanna rip dawn to pieces...innocent Luna being threatened is Not cool...

loved the Marian 'if it was all about nature' as that totally shut down Bonnies opinion. and she knew it was true!

Luna's mother's death was heart breaking and I knew it was coming, watery eyes and all there so Im going to say well written for poignancy's sake guy. sad tearjerker...

a short chapter but mostly predictable that Jack and Skye are in denial...

haha!...snickers* over confidence will get ya every time loxley!

dawn always was a vicious b...i hope she gets her just deserts...

My opinion of loxley hath been vindicated by morals, thank god! gotta say i was VERY suprised by Marian tho..happily i might add..

ok,this just got GOOD...im seriously concerned.

im still on Robins side here. Nick n Judy act out of misplaced honor.

I will take robins side here. he has the balls to do the right thing in spite of opposition and will go to his death knowing he's right in his actions.
a worthy personage indeed!

thats the bogo i have come to hate in most stories i read. so , good to see a new side even though he was forced into it initially, but then accepted and..well, a better Bogo for once!