Reviews for Take A Stand
LokiStoneheart chapter 21 . 8/4
So two things 1.) the honey: The story? Great. Characters? Amazing. Luna? Adorable. 2.) the hatchet: The grammar? It’s trash, every fifth sentence is basically trash. Missing words make some sentences unreadable, wrong pronouns, their-they’re-there and your-you’re mistakes all over the place almost no instance where you used them correctly. The grammar is just that terrible. Everything else makes this a 8/10 and english is not even my 2nd language... it’s the third... get a beta reader or something to correct the mistakes hell I’ll do it if you ask me because this story deserve to be the top fanfiction on this site. Please, please, PLEASE fix the grammar.
LokiStoneheart chapter 4 . 8/3
Waddles? Really? :D good story so far btw
ZCC chapter 4 . 5/19
Wait... m.m. Means merry men!
ZCC chapter 4 . 5/19
In my opinion, even though I don’t date outside of my race. What goes on in the bedroom is not my business. As long as it’s consensual, I don’t care what race or gender you are
Mdilday chapter 26 . 4/22
The story was interesting, it was funny and unexpected seeing Bambi and his friends this way. For Felicia, you could’ve just made her a gray cat that she was in Great Mouse Detective and not a wildcat(unless you decided to make this version of her a bit different), I mean there were hints that animals like cats and dogs exist in the movie Zootopia for example, at the end of the movie Lionhart was reading a cat fancy magazine with a brown and white cat on the cover, a orange tabby cat(it wasn’t a tiger, it had pointy ears and dark orange stripes) on the Meowana on Weaselton’s bootleg DVDs and on Judy’s iPod there a band called Beagles in her playlist, not to mention that there were animals that were domestic like sheep, pigs and horses in the film.
mr.mhj0198 chapter 31 . 1/30
This is the best thing I've read since "Malice"
isara-love chapter 10 . 1/30
Judy Is to much forgiven. -_-
FinnTheHumanMC chapter 21 . 1/18
damn , i was starting to like you Judy than you just put milk in your tea. milk is for wusses

jk
Maliaki chapter 31 . 1/11
Just finished rereading Take A Stand. Loved it just as much as i did the first time! Tears and all xD. Going to reread/finish Star of Ceartais now. Cant wait xD
save code chapter 1 . 1/1
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Spirit777 chapter 12 . 12/21/2018
I really love this story! I love Disney’s Robin Hood and Zootopia! Robin’s actually a good guy, I’m hoping he is pardoned or something good! I’ll keep on reading to find our! Love this story! Oo-de-lally, oo-de-lally!
jtdarkman chapter 31 . 12/16/2018
Oh...m. gooookdness gahhh that was amazing and awesome and tear jerking and wonderful and so many emotions...grownups are weird is my favorite line I swear. I've grown attached to all these characters and it's just so amazing thanx for the ride thus far and please keep on writing
jtdarkman chapter 25 . 12/15/2018
That made me cry.
jtdarkman chapter 16 . 12/13/2018
Lol my favourite part Grownups are weird lol
Thunderbird 22 chapter 14 . 12/6/2018
Holy Hell, all these references are fookin great, you my friend are a genius.
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