The tension! The Drama! And with all the background stuff... Dawn...

THE FEELS!

breathless! you have the tension and pacing pegged. A few minor editing issues, but nothing severe.

I like this version of Bogo.

also.

Oh shit!

tension much? I am soooo binging this.

I am appreciative of how you've slipped lines of the Robin Hood movie into this. quite skillfully done, molding the scenes to allow the lines to fit naturally

Great story

When Robin entered the apartment and Luna prepared to hit him, I could not stop laughing
As it says in the chapter, he was 'outfoxed' by a kid

Very different to see Stu as the one accepting Nick and Judy's relationship and Bonnie losing her cool
In other stories I have read, it is the other way around
Looking forward to what happens in the future regarding the Hopps clan

Love the plethora of references to other Disney animal movies
We have already seen references to Robin Hood
And here we have the stars of Bambi
Well Done

this is a tribute to jill fine r.i.p.

ah the title is a french word why in the fanfic every body love use french word mais sa va je suis français donc tranquille

maximus corona ?

I love the addition of the great mouse detective and the rescuers

I love the addition of the great mouse detective and bianca/bernard from the adventures