By far one of the best stories I’ve ever read! The plot was hooking and well thought out, I thought that every detail was cleverly thought out and I liked the Robin Hood theme, was very interesting and unique, I will definitely be re-reading this in the future, my one and only criticism is that the spelling and grammar could use some work, maybe seek out a beta, otherwise tho, I’d give it a lot of praise! Great work, and thank you for this story!

The ending to this chapter was funny in my opinion, how Judy reacted was the perfect way to react if you heard that news. Also I feel sorry for Jack because of what happened, but karma was nice and decided to let jack find out who caused the “accident” and he’s probably going to testify against them.

Awesome death for Bellweather! Nice and gory and painful! I love it!

I can't find the lemon scene on your tumblr page. Could you please send a link?

I love the Sheldon quote there!Great story! Can't wait to read more!

poor sandra. i was really hoping that she will survive somehow :'(
this is really a dark chapter!

Is Misdaad from anywhere or did you make her?

Also I can't believe my guess on Jack was correct.

Oh God this is too funny. And fabulously written! I know I'm over a year late with this comment, and everyone's finished with Chapter 1 and gone on miles ahead of me, but wot the heck ...

its shit

What a ride! Great story, rollercoaster feels, wonderful characters. Drama, angst, puns, adorable kits, romance, love, reunions, reconciliations and, best of all, shredded Bellweather. Very enjoyable. I'm off to the sequel! Thanks for sharing this delightful trip into your Zootopian creation. May your muse never falter! Thanks! Stubat

it just gets better and better

XD I'M ON THE FLOOR this story is awesome. But why make the mother against inters bonnie seemed so upbeat and cheery in the movie

Fantastic! Loved the disney cameos ;3

Vindication! Sooo glad that didn't get brushed over, nick was even pissed about the same stuff I was yelling internally about too.

Alright just a short one before I continue, I really hope the fact Judy just held a gun on nick gets addressed. Cause that is a huuuuuge breach of trust. Onwards with the story!