Reviews for Take A Stand |
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![]() ![]() wtf! Clawhouser does not have a boyfriend unless he is gay ! |
![]() ![]() this is probably the only thing that have ever read and enjoyes, ive always hated books on how boring they can be but this got me intrigued and amazed me. |
![]() ![]() Ok my only to problems with this story, gay bogo and Bonnie being the one against the relationship every single story I've read stu was the apprehensive one, Bonnie being this way doesn't fit her character |
![]() ![]() ![]() gravity falls reference can anyone find it |
![]() ![]() Love it! definitely like more details during sexy time lol |
![]() ![]() YAY DOWN AND DIRTY! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really was enjoying the chapter until...this scene. So how long have you two known each other?” “Since we were kids.” Simba smiled. “Yeah Nala was Simba’s bully at school.” Timon laughed, sitting on the grass. “What?” Basil scoffed. “Guys come on.” Simba appealed. “Simba was a massive cry baby all the way through school.” Pumba embarrassed his old friend. “Yeah, every recess Nala would give Simba wedgies and pin him.” Timon chortled. “He’d be like ‘That evil Nala kicked me wah wah’ ha ha ha.” Pumba jested. “Awww that’s so romantic.” Skye commented. “In what way is that romantic?” Clawhauser asked, who was cuddling a very drunk Bogo. “Don’t you know? When a girl bullies a boy it means she likes him.” Judy informed “That’s how I acted with my first crush.” “Same here.” Skye agreed. “Love does strange things to mammals.” David responded drinking wine from a mouse sized glass. This scene right here can go straight to hell. |
![]() ![]() I fucking loved your story man so awsome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit man this hit wayyyyyy too close to home. I know exactly how luna feels. Minus the hugging part. My only parent died when I was 12 and I was all alone... Great writing. Seriously. Your writing is amazing and I don't mean to be a downer but I just felt I needed to share this. Keep doin what you're doin. I'm glad I came across zeig's art for this story. And I'm glad you recommended me to read it and yes it is good. Sincerely, Vengarl |
![]() ![]() Cool awesome story man love it I like the way you put st . Zoo in the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I very much loved the story. I have been keeping up with the Star , great work. If you get the time and inclination, I think it would be nice to at least do another short story to complement Take a Stand, to at least set up Star a little more. great work, keep on wring such good stories please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Basil's husband said "oh my" in the lab, was it a normal "oh my" or a George Takei "Oh Myyy!"? He is one of my favorite American actors. Let me know at if you want to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story. I look for emotion in the I read, and you really amazed me, my friend. As I read the second-to-last section of the twenty-fourth chapter, I took your recommendation and listened to Salut d'amour as I read a certain part. As the music ended and Miss Victoria Todd passed with a smile on her lips, I openly cried. This proves that even though I couldn't care less about action and profanity, I am not some sort of drone. I like art, and this story might soon become a part of a variation of culture. I absolutely love such genius, and I am certain that the next generation will love this, and that this fanfiction continuity will be popular amongst Zootopia fans. It will be passed on from generation to generation of Zootopia fans, regardless of race, sex, and religion. I thank you for providing us with a possibility of post-film events in such a thrilling, heartwarming, and captivating way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just one question: so when did the events in chapter 1 happen? I'm not seeing any explanations for chapter 1. Maybe I was being careless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (mental image:Bogo naked... ewwww) |