|Reviews for When Elia Got Away|
| LadyKatherine29 chapter 1 . 2/17
This was very interesting. I'm not sure Ned would be so uncaring about his sister. It seems rather cold of him not to care about his own nephew. Still a very interesting short look into a possible out come. Of what happened with Rhaegar and Roberts war.
| AnnaMartell chapter 1 . 8/21/2017
Great story it was nice to see story the other way around. People get offended over Lyanna's treatment but tend to forget about Elia
| superwonder chapter 1 . 6/19/2017
i have to admit i did not see this story ending like this. completely unexpected. i thought rhaegar targaryen would still die. i could see this story becoming more than a one-shot simply because it's unknown if jon snow lived or died while lyanna was giving birth and what the starks think about what was done to lyanna.
| daenerys and khal drogo 4ever chapter 1 . 9/30/2016
Ladyres, why don't you go read other 100000000 stories about Lyanna and Rhaeghar and leave Queen Elia alone. please don't worry about hot-headed idiots and continue writing
| Anon chapter 1 . 9/2/2016
ladyres: How dare she? It is her right! It's called fan fiction for a reason, idiot. If you don't like it, then don't read it. But do not throw a little hissy fit and complain, because under no means, is it the author's obligation to write what YOU want.
Emma Char Felton: Please ignore such ignorant and baseless "flames." I commend you for exploring a tragic character that is frequently overlooked, and for offering her some happiness. This was a unique read! Nicely done.
| Julyza chapter 1 . 8/23/2016
what Rheagar did to Lyanna should come and bite him in his royal targaryan ass via Jon and Visenya, imagine his bastard son doing exactly what Rheagar did except with Aegon's soon to be sisterwife Visenya , and history literally repeats itself ,with the exception of Jon coming out the Victor
| TheMoonsAndSuns chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
Great story, love it.
| ladyres chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
How dare you treat lyanna like she's nothing and jon elia could not have kids after aegon and tararyens can have more then one wife
| Eh chapter 1 . 8/19/2016
Why's Ned ruling the north? Considering the Targs killed his father, brother, brother in all but blood (Robert) and sister (as far as he knows) I'm pretty sure he'd either fight to the death, or still be fighting. So Rhaegar would not be king of all the kingdoms since the North would still be in rebellion.
| ArtimuosJackson chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
And in the end when White Walkers came without dragons and Azor Ahai the world got destroyed and ruled by dead and Rhaegar cursed himself in the end why he doesn't follow the prophecy and George Martin ends the series before the first book.
| julyza chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
This become a multichapter story , Jon should get revenge on Rheagar because ...the north remembers
| Arianna Le Fay chapter 1 . 8/18/2016
love it i always felt sorry for elia and her children and i never thought rhaegar truly loved lyana i cant wait to see the next one