|Reviews for This Tangle of Thorns|
| Guest chapter 15 . 7/16
I absolutely love this and need more pls update if you have time!
| Guest chapter 15 . 6/1
This fic is so rich in detail, it really makes you feel like you’re with the characters or you can at least appreciate the depth to them. So complex but written so simplistically yet poetically, every word has intention and it keeps me hooked! Really well done on this
| Ariwolff14 chapter 15 . 4/10
This is so fantastic…. perfect Lolita vibes and the way you write Riddle…. chefs kiss *
| gemini shawty chapter 15 . 4/3
this is making me rethink my opposition on tomione stories
| Guest chapter 15 . 3/27
Please please please update! I miss reading this masterpiece
| Fictionalized chapter 1 . 2/24
I find this story a fitting narrative for a fictionalized story of my German life. Or rather I hope its narrative provokes me into writing my own extremely fictionalized autobiography because this story focused so extremely intensely on physical sensations.
Germany is after all unfortunately a country with a complete lack of transcendence and higher dimensional thinking unlike America or the Asian countries.
I am glad you wrote it.
| Guest chapter 15 . 1/7
Wow! What a rollercoaster lol I just read this whole thing in the space of an hour and now I’m addicted so thank you :)
| ohmygodihavetodothisemail chapter 15 . 12/18/2021
I support women’s rights…but more importantly I support women’s wrongs
| iminadaze chapter 15 . 12/1/2021
i hope you come back to write more of this story. i’d really love to read what you plan for the story and the ending with this, though i feel like hermione and tom will both die at the end lol.
| iminadaze chapter 4 . 12/1/2021
i get a feeling that tom might kill the mom…
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/17/2021
Seriously hope you find inspiration for this story again because it is my absolute fave! Your writing techniques are beyond beautiful and you are a great story teller, hope you’re well!
| Xi chapter 1 . 10/27/2021
Lovely story! I love how you used lolita's concept for your own story
and it your own. ;)
I desire to write a story with the lolita concept about middle-school time; an extremely fictionalized memoir with a fictional attractive male teacher becoming my father by having an affair with my mother who is older than him but also still beautiful.
What I like for my characters however seem to be "organic substance" in form of organic reactions, actions and behaviors towards each other.
So I hope your story can inject some of those into my characters, and I especially find the prose of your story at some parts very haunting and eerie.
| notthatchhavi chapter 2 . 10/14/2021
Oh fuck, the ending
I love this fanfiction
It's very eerie
| SnapeIsMyPatronus chapter 15 . 9/17/2021
still here, still patiently waiting for you. no pressure lol. but for real, I love this fic and always keep an eye on. you do you boo, we'll be here.
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/9/2021
Ahhhhh I really want her to get the better of him! But then I really want him so stay one step ahead of her at all times! Lol I can’t decide and that makes you a great writer because boy I am conflicted!