Reviews for This Tangle of Thorns
shezwriter chapter 14 . 11/10/2018
Jesus fuck this is so disturbingly dark...you're a fantastic writer. I'm so terrified for Hermione. Could psychopathy be any scarier? I'm not even sure how your brain came up with a concept so unsettling. Tom as Humbert Humbert yikes

And while the subject matter here is extremely taboo and disturbing, you're an amazing writer. Extremely, extremely skilled. Like wow.
Erica18 chapter 14 . 11/5/2018
Continue por favor.
Guest chapter 14 . 10/21/2018
I wish this was some a published classic piece of literature so I could spend time analyzing it instead of other lit. Ithink when you update I'll combust cos this is so good
Mr. Meowington chapter 14 . 10/18/2018
one word: OOF
Astaraya chapter 14 . 10/17/2018
UGH THIS IS SO GOOOOOOD. I hope there's another chapter soon omygod.
heckin chapter 14 . 10/12/2018
pls ud hihi
Guest chapter 14 . 10/7/2018
Every night I pray for an update, but rereading this helps my soul! How do you even write like this? It’s amazing
xxXTomione4EvaXxx chapter 14 . 10/2/2018
Me after every chapter(actuallyOHFUCKOHFUCKOHFUCK. The story is insanely good. Writing is perfect. Dialogue between Tom and Hermione is SO GOOD. You captured Tom perfectly. Gonna read Lolita and watch Stoker while waiting for the next update. Thanks for sharing, this is amazing.
JD SPARKS chapter 14 . 9/28/2018
So, I apologize I may be one of those who is too weak to go on. I'm sorry! Your writing is beautiful and the characters and dialogue are great. I love the little things you insert all the details with the books, the weird subtle exchanges between these two, the tie. that was um hot. haha. Unfortunately Hermione is kind of treading into waters that are too far from my head canon to follow. I've actually had a morbidly sick fascination with serial killers after starting your fic tbh.

But the more I watch documentaries on these types the more I don't think I can keep on with this story. I'd love the idea for Tom to turn into some Dexter type, but they aren't really in any forensic type roles to really be playing vigilante so unfortunately it more than likely will be headed in areas too dark for my comfort range. His urges and hers going to far into psychotic territories I'd rather hope people didn't fantasize about. lol. I do love the like illicit, secret affair aspects, though in my head I'm like Hermione's 17. Lol. but I'm not sure I'm ready for anything more than that.

Thank you for writing for this pairing, you are very talented and I'd love to read some more works by you. Sorry I'm a big wuss! Good luck with the story! I hope you continue writing Tomione fics, as I do like this pairing a lot. I'm happy that there's such a range of works for them, yours is just in that area I'm not exactly ready to venture into just yet.
JD SPARKS chapter 5 . 9/26/2018
I can't stop, it's so wrong but I feel like a kid peering between my parents fingers. I shouldn't keep reading but I want to know what happens! I'm very intrigued, Tom is so very disturbing!
JD SPARKS chapter 2 . 9/25/2018
OMG. I just started this, found it on a Tomione rec list and wasn't sure what to expect. I kind of love this, but also Tom is almost even more disturbing here as a creep who is like playing with poor Jean Granger's heart while seducing an underage girl, who is her daughter. it's so fucked up but I'm also like intrigued. The writing is good, and characters well done. love Hermione and Jean's mother/daughter relationship but also makes it that much harder to read knowing who poor Jean has just brought into their lives!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/15/2018
uhhhhhhhmmmm fjdkfkskkfkeofkdkdks ...i lOv this with my whole ass soul ! this is fucking brilliant!
Jpadgett0210 chapter 14 . 9/3/2018
Great story! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Kathalea chapter 14 . 8/25/2018
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.. I'M ACTUALLY ONE OF THOSE WIERD PEOPLE WHO LIKES SICK AND TWISTED LOVE LIFES AND BEFORE I READ YOUR BOOK I ALREADY WATCHED THE MOVIE LOLITA, AND I'LL BE REALLY HAPPY IF YOU CONT. THIS STORY PLEASEEEE
nctdream chapter 14 . 8/22/2018
I miss this fic so much
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